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little thing my friend wrote

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little thing my friend wrote

Postby Deadishot » Jun 22nd, '06, 17:37

my friend wrote this thing about my ex bf- she was a slut adn cheated on her man...


Yo yo check it out, This girls a slut, She prolly takes it up the butt
From guys who arent her own,
All the girl does is bone
She cheats and lies
And is really good at unzipping flys
She thinks phone sex is cool
But really shes just a tool
If I had the chance I'd break her face
Yeah that'd put her in her place
Her friends are gross too
They stick to her like glue
After all they're all shes got
Without them she'd die n rot.
They better all be quiet
Or me and Steve will start a riot
Last edited by Deadishot on Jun 25th, '06, 03:52, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby Infliction » Jun 23rd, '06, 05:06

hah i liked it :smoking: thats the type of friend u need specially after a breakup, i think u should hook up wit her :smoking: :smoking:
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Postby Infliction » Jun 23rd, '06, 05:15

and htis jus inspired me to write a knew ryme, look out for it, I'm spose to make a mixtape this summer, hopefully all goes well. :D "Hoe's that be like Bro's" thass the title :smoking:
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Postby katastrophe » Jun 23rd, '06, 07:44

i like it too...that was good work
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Postby sinemm » Jun 23rd, '06, 12:59

yeah its good it can dedicate to all bitches like that..lol
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Postby Coccoa » Jun 23rd, '06, 20:02

Jesus....what on earth.... :confusion:
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Postby Deadishot » Jun 25th, '06, 03:55

Jesus....what on earth....

hahaha
thanks for tha feedback guys
ill tell her you insired her plaspp shell be really happy
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