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Those Memories

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Those Memories

Postby Inzanity » Jun 18th, '06, 04:10

here it is the last song I'm posting here on TR enjoy it and let me know what u think

(verse 1)
Lately I can't seem to handle all of lifes stresses, and I just been feeling so restless,
it hurts when I look back on the years, I've spent so many nights prayin' that the past dissapears
I'm amazed that I made it through these past 16 years, through the laughs and the tears ,
I try to laugh through the tears, wat amazes me more it that my stressful mind,
has stood this test in time, shawn me and u shared the best of times,
now let me try to comprehend it, u were there 4 me when I was in the deepest state of depression
rememeber Freshmen year at Comprehensive, when we got suspended,
for smoking in the girls bathroom I still can't believe that u actually went in,
and all the times that we got detention, and that time u told me u loved me I never thought u ment it
and u know I got to mention, that we caused alot of trouble even though most of it was not intended,
and in the end we paid the consequences, but most of it wasn't are fault we were just 2 crazy kids who lost are sences,

(Course 1)
but those memories could never be lost, those memories will forever be ours,
those memories are worth every cost, and I could never sever the scars,
that were left in my heart, when u left but in the end it was best we depart
but those memories could never be lost, those memories will forever be ours,
those memories are worth every cost, and I could never sever the scars,
that were left in my heart, when u left but in the end it was best we depart

(Verse 2)
I used to live so carnally minded, and I was partially blinded
the whole time God was sendin' me signs and, I couldn't read wat the signs said
I couldn't see just what the future had in store, and as I'm writin' this the sadness pours
out of my emotions so let me bring u back to a place in time, when I had a hateful mind
lost in the outcast crowd, if I would've known then what I know now
and lookin' back I have to laugh, cause' the whole time I thought God hated me
when really He was the only one who had my back, when every1 else degraded me
like that time I wanted to committ suicide, and yea it's true I tried
to slit my wrist I guess the knife wasn't sharp, I was like the pimple that life couldn't pop
cause' some how I survived and made it through the toughest times
and lookin' back it's amazing how, God brought me through the toughest fazes wow

(Course 2)
but those memories could never be lost, those memories will forever be ours,
those memories are worth every cost, and I could never sever the scars,
that were left in my heart, from the abuse cause' I was left in the dark
but those memories could never be lost, those memories will forever be ours,
those memories are worth every cost, and I could never sever the scars,
that were left in my heart, from the abuse cause' I was left in the dark

(Verse 3)
Remember back in grade 7, when Derek got into that accident that took his life at age 11
thats too early for some1 to go to heaven, and how about the time that my aunt Estel died
God theres times when I still cry, my freshmen year of high school I lost my uncle Lenny
I'll never forget that feelin' it was a feelin' so empty, and when my aunt Mary died
lookin' back by the age of 17 I had witnessed some teary times,
it makes me think about how we could be taken from this life in less then a second
and how we shouldn't take life for granted God gave us breath so it's best to respect it
so try not to dwell on the pain and the sorrow, cause' we're not promised 2marrow,
so just take life as it comes one day at a time, and do ur best to stay out of crime
cause' we gotta be role models for the next generation, we ain't got time to be messin' wit Satan
cause' all Satan wants is 4 us to throw are lives away, but God want's to see us through to brighter days

(Course 3)
but are memories could never be lost, are memories will forever be ours,
are memories are worth every cost, and we could never sever the scars,
that were left in are hearts, from the lives that death tore apart
but are memories could never be lost, are memories will forever be ours,
are memories are worth every cost, and we could never sever the scars,
that were left in are hearts, from the lives that death tore apart

(Course 1)

(Course 2)
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Postby katastrophe » Jun 18th, '06, 04:19

thats pretty good
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Postby rhiannon » Jun 18th, '06, 09:35

fuck that was really good well done i liked it alot! :happy:
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Postby Inzanity » Jun 18th, '06, 11:22

Sarah wrote:Excellent work. Nice job ;) I loved it. :D



Kinda disappointing this will be your last song here though :( . Your poems have given me inspiration to write, specially since I learn by watching others


aww thank u sarah I never had any1 say that I inspired them thats sweet I just woke up and came online read wat u said it just made my day :)
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Postby sinemm » Jun 18th, '06, 14:31

really nice :)
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Postby FTW » Jun 25th, '06, 13:02

nice shit
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Postby FTW » Jun 25th, '06, 13:53

y did she leave?
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hella good

Postby soperman005 » Jun 25th, '06, 18:15

that was a really good rap it was very emotional and i like it like i felt like i could relate to it and shit. hella puts growin up into words
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