The Masterpiece

[Atone]

steadily on the grind,, for those that didn't see me comin i passed hints
ahead of my time, i'm the future you just the past tense
i'm incredible on the microphone, most of you lack sense
you bums can't touch me, but you want war? thats tense
they said i couldn't do it, i couldn't make it, thats then
this is now, jaws on the floor lookin dumb, thats them
no glocks no mack tens, i just stack pens
i knock out opponetes while you little girls try to slap men
take you on a wild ride, better be sure your strapped in
and that boy Derty got me into mr. hamilton
he got haters to, we both know how to handle them
i act out like charlie, gotta keep this candle lit
never stoppin i stay on go like i'm sleepin on monopoly
cuz honestly it's awful that none of you know my biography
yet you hate on me constantly and call me a wanna be
i don't understand the animosity, get off of me
i'm awesome G, on an odyssey to be what i outta be
this music is my lottery, but i use it responsibly
and teach you the way it was taught to me
i'm just tryin to to put sense in these rhymes
to reach out and put some sense in ya minds
to escape the sinical times
it's critical, and in case your clinically blind
just listen, i'm speakin the truth
and honestly i hope these words are creepin on thru
fuck the money, i'm just reachin to you


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[DƎRDYPK]

werrrd, pretty cold stuff homie.
you should take a lil more time writing though, tune up whatever bits you need to when you finish a verse or what not

[KaZer]

Nice, I like it. Keep it up

[Atone]

I thought this was much better than what u posted yesterday... Some funny lines that made me laugh.

Some nice rhyming in this piece but was a little hard to flow for me. Nice piece keep dropping

The thing i posted yesterday was for jokes, since Big Sean got a song where the chorus is just ass ass ass ass ass i wanted to make fun of it with AIDS

[KaZer]

Why the hell not, just have some fun, doe