Staying Solid (Feat. Eedee)

[Mr.DGAF]

Mic and alive work because of the distinct I sound and the syllables around them. End rhymes are not just the last word of a bar, it's the last rhyming phrase. That basically means its not limited to only one word. You can overlook one syllable words if they blend correctly in the multi; not every word has I rhyme exactly.

It's a lot to learn haha, it came to me over time watching the forum. Rhyming isn't everything but stringing together an impressive multi is a nice thing to have in your repertoire.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Mic and alive work because of the distinct I sound and the syllables around them. End rhymes are not just the last word of a bar, it's the last rhyming phrase. That basically means its not limited to only one word. You can overlook one syllable words if they blend correctly in the multi; not every word has I rhyme exactly.

It's a lot to learn haha, it came to me over time watching the forum. Rhyming isn't everything but stringing together an impressive multi is a nice thing to have in your repertoire.

Eminem in his TES days is an example, too. What I noticed is that he will re-use a word in a rhyme scheme and an end rhyme but would still work. For example:

"Don't put out, i'll put you out, won't get out, i'll push you out,
Puss blew out, poppin' shit, wouldn't piss on fire to put you out,"

And..

"Am I too nice, buy you ice, bitch if you died, I wouldn't buy you life,"

Sometimes you don't need to think of different rhymes, sometimes shit just works.

[Eedee]

Bigray, I highlighted the rhymes for you. You don't have a grasp on multis, so I know seeing the rhymes are hard for you. But look farther in the bar... the multis are there and they DO rhyme. Everything isn't just one syllable.

As for the "feel me / seem real" rhyme, I intended that to be an inverse. So feel me / seem real

[Eedee]

And with multis, only the stressed syllables have to rhyme. Unless you're stressing everything like in JP's example

"am I too nice, buy you ice, bitch if you died, wouldn't buy you life"

If it's like "nothing inside / humbleness I" i'm only stressing the NOTHing inSIDE / HUMBleness I" so they don't all have to rhyme, just the stressed syllables. (Although in this case, inside / ness I do rhyme lol)

[JamaicanPattlez]

And with multis, only the stressed syllables have to rhyme. Unless you're stressing everything like in JP's example

"am I too nice, buy you ice, bitch if you died, wouldn't buy you life"

If it's like "nothing inside / humbleness I" i'm only stressing the NOTHing inSIDE / HUMBleness I" so they don't all have to rhyme, just the stressed syllables. (Although in this case, inside / ness I do rhyme lol)

Exactly. But it's a complicated concept to get too, I remember getting so frustrated over that lol.

[Francesco]

Well done y'all!

[JamaicanPattlez]

Well done y'all!

Thank you. I liked this verse lol.