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Not worth myself in Silver

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Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Just Silver » Jun 14th, '13, 14:20

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People only know me as a drug promoter
And the unemployed bum sitting on a sofa
Even though thoughts are so deep i get trapped
In a menacing batch when these thoughts counteract
With my psyche matched like shoes to my flow in tune
Confuse myself with drugs although shouldn't approve
It's all i knew what to do it's how i grew up in school
My dad died before i was old enough to visit the tomb
It's all cool meet kendrick at the alcohol pool
And take a swan dive like fancy napkins with spoons
I'm crazy acting like a tool,screw it ill get hammered tonight
Knowing damn right everyday I'm as high as a kite
Find careers tomorrow payroll by the next week
My peers said follow their lead I'm at less speed
Way far behind not even close where the rest be
Drugs and problems are stressing feels like wrestling
I'm down to my last straw so this drink is a blessing
I guess we, must just move as individuals
Some are the doctors, lawyers and criminals
Until they spot ya and your visual to eyesight
Your just another one similar to my life
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Francesco » Jun 14th, '13, 15:30

Deep... it it really reflect on your personal life of course. Well told story overall & regardless anyway... :y:
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Just Silver » Jun 14th, '13, 15:32

Thanks guy
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Francesco » Jun 14th, '13, 15:40

Just Silver wrote:Thanks guy

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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Jun 14th, '13, 17:13

Really nice man, at first this started off slow for me but then it started picking up. The rhyming was alright, the flow was good and I liked the concept, it's pretty deep. It's dope man, nice drop.
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Just Silver » Jun 14th, '13, 17:14

Thanks Guy i needed to drop a new quick piece that wasn't a Collab :y:
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Sam. » Jun 14th, '13, 22:40

Tomorrow. Sorry, have to go.
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Just Silver » Jun 15th, '13, 02:34

It's all good :y: glad you'll check it regardless
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Sam. » Jun 15th, '13, 21:12

This is some awesome shit. Absolutely enjoyed it. I don't know why people are sleeping on this. Everything was fine just work on the pattern in which you place your Multis.
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Just Silver » Jun 15th, '13, 22:10

thanks guy :y:
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Just Silver » Jun 23rd, '13, 19:56

Last bump
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby SliK » Jun 24th, '13, 00:12

I think this is your best piece, good shit :y:
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Re: Not worth myself in Silver

Postby Just Silver » Jun 24th, '13, 00:33

Thanks guy
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