The art of war

[SliK]

Ive been itchin' to start pennin' this track
Way before you even fell in the trap
Years ago, two thousand eleven in fact
since you voiced your views on heaven and crap
IRRELEVENT facts, also known as opinions
Never won a battle, your opponents are grinnin'
Known as a pigeon, you're a major flight risk
Might abandon the forum if you hear a slight diss
He'll probably AN HERO after a battle like this
Every time that I diss I picture his face
Cos it fills me with rage, the shit's a disgrace
Bitchin' for days cos Eedee fucking murked him
Then turns it around like really nothin hurt him
My only concern is, when you're actin' this way
the image of a stoner, that you portray
Is the image that ALL stoners have to embrace
Cos one stupid fuck must react to the hate
But the brain in my head that hasn't decayed
Interprets your behaviour like "that's a disgrace"
And just for that shit you need slapped in the face
And I know what to use - a capital K
(I didn't plan that rhyme, it just happened that way)
And I'll finish this off with: Canada's gay.

[Snakebeast]

OOHHHHHH SHEEEET it's on now. though I must say, SliK bodied you, Bigray. no offense, but just...DESTROYED.

Never won a battle, your opponents are grinnin'



He'll probably AN HERO after a battle like this



Bitchin' for days cos Eedee fucking murked him



And I'll finish this off with: Canada's gay.

......

i hope Ray eats your soul, you mofo.


Srsly though, great diss verse. I have next to nothing to criticize. Probably because it's a diss verse. The only thing to measure in a diss verse is how well it disses, and this one does it GREAT. Really stepping up the game here

[SliK]

[12characters]

What's the "AN HERO" line about?

[Snakebeast]

http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/an-hero

[12characters]

oh shit

[CrashBand]

The ending rhyme scheme was great.

My only concern is, when you're acting this way,
The image of a stoner, that you portray
Is the image that ALL stoners have to embrace
Cos one stupid fuck's reacting to hate

[Sam.]

That flawless flow of thought all sticking together so magnificently- awesome stuff. I loled at the initial bars, they were hot, but no so much towards the end. Impressive, nonetheless.

Hot diss.

[Mr.DGAF]

Good shit man. You kind of have an easy flowing set of rhymes, doesn't seem forced or anything. I've seen that from a few members here. Nice drop.

[Spyder]

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