Mirror

[Mr.DGAF]

Nice man, I was waitin for more replies to that drop haha. Some nice lines in here for sure, I really like the first bars and the scheme you kept. That ego line was the hardest hitting line, along with the last two bars. Nice to see you drop man, you and geno have been kinda absent from the CW for a while. Also really liked that proof line haha

[PAINKILLƎR]

Aw shit, Menzo solo piece. Very rare.

I thought this was insane man. The rhyming was sick, lots of hard hitting and clever lines. You got down to business right from the start. Ego line was lethal, the Ye line was very accurate. Well done, great drop.

[Snakebeast]

Dis good shit: For a second I thought you were Geno. Please don't hurt me. Anyways, loved this line:

"It's like measurin' an ember to that of a flame
Jumps on my nuts, still manic and crazed"

I like it when people use "flame" in their rhymes. It makes me wet.

[Mr.DGAF]

Tbh, I almost missed the mirrored response. It took a few reads. I knew I had heard that opening scheme before hahaha.

[Spyder]

Shots at slik, should battle tbh. Good to see you writing again

[Sam.]

Did Newton's Apple prompt you to post here again? lol

The very 1st line gave it away, but Geno's post made it more clear. This is a decent diss. But you saying 'This isn't really a good diss' is maybe right from the overall battling perspective, but creatively this is fabulous stuff. It seems easy reciprocating someones else's rhymes, but keeping it relevant and still keeping your originality is hard. But you did it. It's a good response, but not the response I expected.

[Sam.]

Post it. I'd like to read it. :P

[Sam.]

Ah, so it's like a trump card? Let's see..

[SliK]

Post it. I'd like to read it. :P

Maybe if Slik provokes me

Interesting....

[Eedee]

Crazy writing dude.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Not good enough to release anything yet

Bullshit! I liked this though, your rhyme schemes and flow's still as solid as I remember back when I used to post often here, and I noticed that your multies are a lot more natural. Now, imo, the only thing I was curious about was this part: "You're beggin' me to diss you, this Aussie is sad / Look at your style, bro, it's been copied intact". Was the meaning supposed to be how it's been copied in full? Cause I thought you were gonna use "in fact" instead of intact so it lead into the next bar. But that's just me lol. Still think it's dope. Keep at it! (And I wanna hear you record doe. I never heard you once lmao.)

[Francesco]

Well done Menzo... Keep that up!

[Halftongue Dre]

Great stuff Menzo, keep writing my dude. Nice rhyming. Intriguing. I like it..

[SliK]

Great stuff Menzo, keep writing my dude. Nice rhyming. Intriguing. I like it..

The original was better

[Francesco]

Anytime Menzo...