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Nicotine (ReSp0n$3 yo)

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Nicotine (ReSp0n$3 yo)

Postby Eedee » Aug 18th, '13, 07:52

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162825&start=15#p2277037

Might was well hop on this circle jerk shit,
It's perfect derpness but I work to hurt kids.
Parents advised, doubt brains aim to say shit,
But just remove the filter, now BasedShady's racist.
Thanks for that SajN, tell me how does my ass taste?
You bit my fucking shit, good luck in the rap game.
That Irwin line was mine, dropped it five months ago,
Gotta give you props, I got the line under though...
Anyway, I'm not here to gloat or shit,
I don't need to, you guys already totaled it.
Crashed and burn, get out the car, bitch
You're more retarded than Helen Keller in darkness.
Rolly, that sucked, seriously, you're awful yo,
You're sizing your wang, but c'mon, drop the Stones.
It's a gimmick, you finna go overload,
Your personality's drier than Emma Stone's vocal chords.
And sorry guys, it's only the cold shoulder,
I'm the king of this shit, homie just Roll over.
...............
And surprise muh'fuckah!This one's for Pain,
But once I'm done with you, swallow your fucking name.
:3
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Re: Nicotine (ReSp0n$3 yo)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 18th, '13, 07:57

Eedee wrote:...............
And surprise muh'fuckah!This one's for Pain,
But once I'm done with you, swallow your fucking name.
:3

Oh shit :laughing: legit laughed at this and you got me by surpised with those lines and gif haha. Dope shit brother lots of clever lines. Also laughed at the way you spelled response. Great drop.
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Re: Nicotine (ReSp0n$3 yo)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 18th, '13, 18:23

Hellen Keller will not stand for this!!!
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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