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Re: conTROL you all ( NAMES DROPPED )

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 18th, '13, 22:33

Lmao hilarious :worship:

Poor Trimss, always taking shit for his nose... I know that feel though.

You straight up went for it, I like that but this was a step down in terms of rhyming, I've seen you do better. But the piece was still nice. Good drop bruh.
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Re: conTROL you all ( NAMES DROPPED )

Postby Trimss » Aug 18th, '13, 22:36

PAINKILLƎR wrote:Poor Trimss, always taking shit for his nose... I know that feel though.


:laughing: True.

Good piece, hage. I laughed. Will retaliate
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Re: conTROL you all ( NAMES DROPPED )

Postby CanadaPure » Aug 19th, '13, 04:15

Your writing style is a bit odd, but I laughed at a few of the lines and enjoyed it all. Good stuff Hage, love that so many different people are jumping in lmao. I'd like to see more of you in CW :D

But I felt under the gun to respond, bring competition & I hope you accept this challenge even if its just for fun.


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Re: conTROL you all ( NAMES DROPPED )

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 19th, '13, 06:30

Menzo wrote:Shit's finna get real when I drop.

Image shit just got real for real real.
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Re: conTROL you all ( NAMES DROPPED )

Postby Francesco » Aug 21st, '13, 23:37

Damn... Nice one Hage! :y:
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Re: conTROL you all ( NAMES DROPPED )

Postby Francesco » Aug 22nd, '13, 10:08

Hage wrote:
Francesco wrote:Damn... Nice one Hage! :y:

Thanks bro :y:


Anytime homie... :y:
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