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verse i wrote at work yesterday

Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 17th, '06, 18:36

I was supposed to be writing for other songs(which I did eventually..and am almost done) and ended up doing this after a certain situation. it has no real structure but I basically just sat down and wrote while I was waiting for someone to come in to work with:

thoughts flurrying through my mind, scurrying/
im worrying, don
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Postby FTW » Jul 17th, '06, 20:39

that was good shit :smoking:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 18th, '06, 03:07

FTW wrote:that was good shit :smoking:


thanks a lot man :worship:
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Postby TiFFany08 » Jul 18th, '06, 03:35

That was pretty good
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Postby cyrusvn » Jul 18th, '06, 07:06

Nice verse man.
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Postby Mc Cubz » Jul 18th, '06, 10:54

yeye nice verse - it shows gud skill when u can rhyme about random topics like that phone call.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 18th, '06, 17:03

eminem_biggest_fan2006 wrote:That was pretty good

cyrusvn wrote:Nice verse man.

Sarah wrote:Nice! Real good shit there :D

Thaks a lot guys...and Sarah :worship:

Mc Cubz wrote:yeye nice verse - it shows gud skill when u can rhyme about random topics like that phone call.

thanks i realized that i can basically write about anything depending what mood im in
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Postby autotooner » Jul 23rd, '06, 07:34

nice work bro, how long you been writing?


I need to get back into it, haven't wrote anything in ages.
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Jul 23rd, '06, 18:00

autotooner wrote:nice work bro, how long you been writing?


I need to get back into it, haven't wrote anything in ages.


thanks man. ive been writing for just over a year. this wasnt my best but just a way to get some feelings out. glad you liked it :happy:
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Postby lenaespiritodefogo » Jul 23rd, '06, 18:13

hey that was pretty good. i like it!! :flower:
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