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Postby sinemm » Jul 26th, '06, 10:52

i wrote it for a boy that i know...


He was a cool and clever boy and also hot..
He wanted to go out with me..i know why..he wanted to make out..
He never falls in love..uses girls and then throw them out..


But even clever people can be stupid..he thinks hes a shit..
Wtf u bullshit..go and find a bitch..and let her suck your d**k
Get away from me..im not your baby girl..
When you say you want me you just make me hurl..
I knew lotsa fuckin pimp like you before
Most of them were same..but im not a whore..
To share everything of me with somebody i must fall in love..
And i dont even like you..thats bad for you..go and die..
wtf
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Postby Shady Spain » Jul 26th, '06, 10:54

I like it,looks like a rap song. ;)
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Postby sinemm » Jul 26th, '06, 11:01

ooh thnx alot :) ;) :happy:
LIFE WOULD BE A MISTAKE WITHOUT MUSIC!!
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Postby stevethetruth » Jul 26th, '06, 15:38

i liked it :D
you got right to the point and called him an asshole
yeah one my friend's, she's sort of in a realationship like that
and it's not good for her
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Postby Coccoa » Jul 26th, '06, 15:40

Didnt like it, sounds like some Lil Kim raps.
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Postby rhiannon » Jul 26th, '06, 15:54

Coccoa wrote:Didnt like it, sounds like some Lil Kim raps.

no it didnt
i liked it nice work :flower:
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Postby sinemm » Jul 26th, '06, 17:15

Coccoa wrote:Didnt like it, sounds like some Lil Kim raps.


ooh really ?? oh my god i wanna die..cuz u didnt like it...i cant believe it..

:D
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Postby sinemm » Jul 26th, '06, 17:16

and steverocks88 and rhiannon thank you both :) :happy:
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Postby Coccoa » Jul 26th, '06, 17:23

Nag nag nag whatever.
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Postby sinemm » Jul 26th, '06, 17:30

:tounge2:
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Postby Coccoa » Jul 26th, '06, 17:42

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Postby katastrophe » Jul 26th, '06, 22:15

nice work
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^^^Propz to McMaybe :worship:
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Postby beccababe2 » Jul 26th, '06, 22:56

:worship: like it.......alot :happy:
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Topher...Topher....Bo Bopher Banana nana fo fopher lol
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Postby sinemm » Jul 27th, '06, 11:36

thank you all.. :) :D :happy:
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