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Unforgotten Love

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Unforgotten Love

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 6th, '06, 01:59

Unforgotten Love
By Bar

when a look in your eye's, a feel like life is fine,
when you look into mine, its like its for the last time,
a look onto the future, you look onto the past
a tell you its gonni last, but you say its gonni pass,
a look at life in a different weiw, like if everything else is gone,
will a still have me and u ,
will we last that long , is our love that strong , or am i wrong,
i know its been a struggle and a fight ,but at the end will everything be al'ight,
a cant tell you how much i feel , i dunno how to prove my love is real,
i love you like a love ma famalie , its just as strong , maybey am wrong ,
a got to ask one thing , what you did have for me ? is it gone...

a need to know the answer so a can move on ,
yes or no is the difference between me staying or goin,
you like you do , then you dont , like seeing green but doin red,
you fucking with my mind so much i think went brain dead,
living this dream but its like a nightmare , like the love is here but it aint there,
ill return to the point of subject wicth is you, the women i love, the one that is true,
when i see you i can barely look, coz i know that your took ,
i feel like i just got hit with the right hook, now look ,
we sort this now on the one spot , no my love is not gonni rot ,
now let me take you by the hand, show you im a still a man and tell you how i feel remeber ,everything here is real,


so this is what its came 2, me and you alone, talking like we used to talk on the phone,
you act like that was soo long ago , when we used to talk from dust till dawn ,
i mean c'mon , you cant say you feelings have just left ,
like palked up n walked away , a talk to you but you look deaf,
like you got a thick ear , like i got a feeling its gonni be a bad yeer,
unless i sort this out right here,
tell me your feelings n ill tell mine back , you look at me like im on crack,
a feel like giving you a slap, c'mon joost tell me the truth do you love me or not,
is there anything left form what we had , why do u act hard but a know you feel sad,
you turn round with a grasp in your throat, like you goin choke, i look with anticipation,
knowing these next few words could be m incarsination,
her lips open i hear the start of her voice ,
she goes to continue talking but my legs have started walking,
wait a need to hear what she has to say , but my brain knows its the wrong answer so i just walked away....


i know i posted the first verse in another topic but this is it completely finished.....feedback would be HIGHLY aprreciated thx :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 6th, '06, 02:15

like i said before great song
can't wait to hear the audio
and for the mixtape to come out lol

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Postby katastrophe » Aug 6th, '06, 02:41

nice job homie...keep it up
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^^^Propz to McMaybe :worship:
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Postby sinemm » Aug 8th, '06, 16:53

thats cool and good job congs..liked it.. :) ;)
LIFE WOULD BE A MISTAKE WITHOUT MUSIC!!
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 02:07

nice job! keep it up! :D
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