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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 22:42

another song i wrote a while back please leave feedback!!!


I want a relationship based on honest and trust
honor and cherish eachother it's a must
I want a relationship that'll grow and never rust
I want it to grow and grow and just
never fail in front of my eyes
just promise me that you'll tell no lies
and you'll be the first thing i piroritize

it'll be no surprise when I meet that special girl
I'll be patient at first
and then give it a little twirl
to see if your my one and only girl
you'll be put to so many tests all over the world
if it only lasts a week i'll leave it on the steps
if it lasts over a week the next thing is sex
there's so many steps above you won't know what's next
it could be marriage in a month and kids in a year
all i know is that you'll still be beautiful dear
and that's excatly what you'll wanna hear
i love you so much i wouldn't be able to bear
if you left my side for a week you'd know I'd care
baby to me your so precious and rare
i may be a guy but it doesn't mean I don't share
and hide my feelings i got up in here
i'll always want you by my side when we ride
when we fly oh so high up in the sky
i'll always be so full of pride
just as long as your by my side

cause I want a relationship based on honest and trust
honor and cherish eachother it's a must
I want a relationship that'll grow and never rust
I want it to grow and grow and just
never fail in front of my eyes
just promise me that you'll tell no lies
and you'll be the first thing i piroritize

another thing i promise is you'll always be in front of my eyes
even when i become internationally known|
you'll still be the star, the number one thing in my dome
i'll even buy your whole family there own home
the next i'll do is buy you so much ice
it can be something you where every day and night
plus you won't even have to worry about the price
after that we'll travel and take so many flights
we'll have a joint bank acount so there'll be no fights
we'll go all over the world and enjoy the sights
i'm doing this for you cause my futures so bright
it'll be bright as long as there's a light
for me to write my raps on a piece of paper right
honey you know your the love of my life
ok just making sure your not thinking twice

cause I want a relationship based on honest and trust
honor and cherish eachother it's a must
I want a relationship that'll grow and never rust
I want it to grow and grow and just
never fail in front of my eyes
just promise me that you'll tell no lies
and you'll be the first thing i piroritize
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 15th, '06, 22:43

Here we go again. Love songs again? Whachu are TR's Nelly?

Damn....when will our song be out?
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 22:44

soon man i'm gonna record and mix it tomorrow
i'm gonna be releasing to songs tomorrow lol
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 15th, '06, 22:46

Finally. Stay Gee'd up.

GGGG-Unit
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 23:11

this one is my fav. of all the otha ones! i cant wait 2 hear it! :D
screename on Zune Social - HispanicLUVER

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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 23:12

MarshellBM wrote:this one is my fav. of all the otha ones! i cant wait 2 hear it! :D

thanks for feed back
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Postby katastrophe » Aug 15th, '06, 23:32

Coccoa wrote:Here we go again. Love songs again? Whachu are TR's Nelly?


:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: thats priceless. its good though homie..i really like it
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 15th, '06, 23:33

Bitches love Nelly, he made it look cool 2 wear bandaids.
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 15th, '06, 23:38

thanks for the feedback katastrophe
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 16th, '06, 00:10

great song man keep it up :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 16th, '06, 00:13

Bar wrote:great song man keep it up :D


thanks for the feedback man :happy:
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 16th, '06, 02:17

bump
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Postby katastrophe » Aug 16th, '06, 03:44

steverocks88 wrote:bump


why do u always say that? :confusion: :unsure:
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 16th, '06, 03:45

katastrophe wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:bump


why do u always say that? :confusion: :unsure:


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because it's bumps the topic up to the top DUH!!
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