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So Be It

Postby Rae » Aug 16th, '06, 17:18

[Chorus]
So be it ...
Why do u care
So be it ...
I cant share my feelings
So be it ...
Becuz i dunno if there still there


[1st Part]
I think i love you,
You said it too,
You said we'd be forever,
But im questioning myself,
Did you even care,
I dont think so,
Was i just another affair,
You said i was special,
And sadly i fell for that sorry line,
You always knew the right things to say,
Even when i had a shitty day


[Chorus]


[2nd Part]
I fell for you pretty hard,
But now im confused about what my true feelings are,
I think ima about to let you go,
So you can suffer,
Just like you've been makin me do,
You knew i loved you!,
Damn you took it all for grantedid,
I gave you my heart with open arms,
But now im taken it back,
You cant have it


[Chorus]


[3rd Part]
Well you've know im not 100% stupid,
And that i would eventually find out,
You've been playin me,
Now i see all the signs,
Well you tot me one thing,
You told me to never under estimate myself,
So im not goin to,
I dont need you!


[Chorus 2x]
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 16th, '06, 17:45

damn that was wicked good

i liked it!!!

are you gonna make an audio??
cause if you do i wanna here it lol
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Postby Rae » Aug 16th, '06, 18:00

aw thanx ... i have a beat 4 it ... and ima try 2 make it audio ... if i do you'll b the 1st 2 hear it! :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 16th, '06, 18:02

sweeeeeeeeeeeet


:D can't wait
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Postby Rae » Aug 16th, '06, 18:19

me neither ... i lookin 4ward to doin it ... lol
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 17th, '06, 00:06

Woah Dude, this is tight!. Really, make an audio it's worth it !
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Postby beccababe2 » Aug 17th, '06, 00:17

Wow this is great! keep it up! :happy:
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Postby Rae » Aug 17th, '06, 21:11

thanx 4 tha feedback u guys! :D
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Aug 17th, '06, 21:15

:worship: thats pretty good :D

you shuld audio it :p :smoking:
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Postby Rae » Aug 17th, '06, 22:13

thanx ... i really didnt think it was that great ... but i guess ya'll would know better than me ... but i do wanna do an audio with it ... when i do i'll post it on trshady
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