Something

[.Giorgo.]

This is my first .. dunnow what. I just wrote it.

[Intro]
Al the times that where hard for me, you would be there,
You support me al the time, Cause you my Girl,,
[Intro]

Baby, i can't stop thinking about you,
You're the girl of my dreams, but i have to forget you
Since u been gone the times are a lot harder for me
I wish i could go back in the time, al the love that you gave me,,
I never forget those times, want them back

It's easyer if i forget you, But never i wil do that,
You where my girl, you always be in my mind,
I'm not that strong, i need you support, u wil never be replaceable,

I haven't the curridge for visitng your grave,
I'm a tuff man, but i would cry in tears,
I remember my birthday, Just you and me,
Al the day, sittin' in the grass, Oh what a good times,

I'l never forget your name, cause you my girl,
You always be, you will always be loved,,,

[Rae]

awww that was good! i liked it ... i cant believe english isnt ur 1st language ... i could never write sumthing in a diff. language! i kinda dum tho... but yeah it was good! keep it up! (i like that u kept it simple with the words 2 ... i hate those big words lol) im keep readin ur stuff when u post it ... so keep em comin

[BLAHBLAHBLAH]

i really like it you really know how to explain ow you feel without repeating everything over and over again good job!!

[.Giorgo.]

awww that was good! i liked it ... i cant believe english isnt ur 1st language ... i could never write sumthing in a diff. language! i kinda dum tho... but yeah it was good! keep it up! (i like that u kept it simple with the words 2 ... i hate those big words lol) im keep readin ur stuff when u post it ... so keep em comin

Hey thanx, really i taught that it sucked. I'm only 14 too, my first year english on school.

But from you, ik like your songs. thanx a lot dude. Really
. I'm gonna write more stuff.

[Rae]

see now u gotta fan! lol ...

[.Giorgo.]

I reallt can't believe that thinks it good. Ur an expierenced writer.
And i known that ur a girl, but is ude Dude erverywhere. Thanx a lot .

Also u BLAHBLAH , i'm so happy now.
Respect

[Rae]

im not an experienced writer ... i've written stuff here and there ... but i just started to love writing about a week ago. lol ... yeah ... im a girl ... im glad ppl r startin 2 notice ... lol jk ... my name is ashley ... but when i write stuff i go by Rae. so know u know sumthin else about me. just keep writin and u'll get better! thats what i do ... and thats what everyone else does ... it works! lol ...

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice i dont feel your pain but keep ya head up and remember she'll always be watching over you so she'll always be supporting you and nice work on the lyrics?