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Why Not, Give it A Try.

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Why Not, Give it A Try.

Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 17th, '06, 22:47

- Why Not, Give It A Try - 2nd song -


I always see you at the bus, i always look at you,
Thats makes me crazy, i don't have the courage for to do it,
I just wanna step at you and ask you out,

Jezus, give me a sign, i don't know what to do,
Every seconde without you is like a torture,
I wanna hold you, i wanna feel you,
Then i would never let you go,, i will always love you,

I'm not sur of it's gonna work, you know,
I'm a Hustler, but Hey, Give it a try, Why not,
Love defeats everything, in my Case is that,,

I will always defend you, i never let you down,
On a day when i have the courage, i'm gonna do it,
But why is this so hard, i'm think that i'm gonna fly to you,
the butterflys in my belly are that hard,, i'm reach from the ground,

thats when i start thinking, why am i so crazy for this girl,
Why i would do so many things for her, why i love her ?
I don't know, that love i think, Love means a ot for me,
Just come to me, i'm affraid that i never get the courage,
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 17th, '06, 22:51

nice work man keep it up :D
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 17th, '06, 23:20

Clarky wrote:I say..........


Move onto rhyming :D

Yeah, i'm sure gonna do that. I've got a few things in my Notepad.
But its hard, i've got 3 bars now :p. But i'm sure gonna do it.
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Re: Why Not, Give it A Try.

Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 15:55

.Giorgo. wrote:- Why Not, Give It A Try - 2nd song -


I always see you at the bus, i always look at you,
Thats makes me crazy, i don't have the courage for to do it,
I just wanna step at you and ask you out,

Jezus, give me a sign, i don't know what to do,
Every seconde without you is like a torture,
I wanna hold you, i wanna feel you,
Then i would never let you go,, i will always love you,

I'm not sur of it's gonna work, you know,
I'm a Hustler, but Hey, Give it a try, Why not,
Love defeats everything, in my Case is that,,

I will always defend you, i never let you down,
On a day when i have the courage, i'm gonna do it,
But why is this so hard, i'm think that i'm gonna fly to you,
the butterflys in my belly are that hard,, i'm reach from the ground,

thats when i start thinking, why am i so crazy for this girl,
Why i would do so many things for her, why i love her ?
I don't know, that love i think, Love means a ot for me,
Just come to me, i'm affraid that i never get the courage,



nice! like i said b4 keep it up. :D ur gettin better! :D
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