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Postby rhiannon » Aug 2nd, '06, 13:42

i dont kno bout this its weird


now its got too far, u ended up on deaths door,
jus realised how it hurts,i cant take it ne more,
i luv u + it hurts,it'll all be okay sumhow,
thinkin bout it makes me wanna,but i cant cry now,

jus wen u started visitin agen,things fell apart,
to think of wat u look like,breaks my heart,
why's this ahppened to u,wunderin why,
wen will nxt meet b,will it b soon,knowin it cudnt b,but now i cant cry,

findin some1 who i truly liked an 4 who i cared,
thinkin mayb it was love,was i stupid or jus scared,
we laughed + talked all night
was i in love,back then i cudnt cry,

now things are pretty messed up,
tryna find help,but nobody gave a fuk,
we dont talk is it me?i wanna kno why,
but even thru this,losin him?i cant cry,

forever it was onnly us three,
now theyre movin in,im worried how it'll be,
she wont let me talk + i dont kno how,
forgettin about how she feels,i cant cry now,

want her to be happy,but i cant let go,
not havin ne1 to talk 1, ima explode,
she wont listen,wont tell me,jus passes her by,
maybe im selfish,maybe she dont care,i cant cry,



im not sure bout it....i jus felt like dat 1 night...an it all got 2 me but i cudnt cry...so ya kno lmao
tell me watcha think plz :(
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 3rd, '06, 01:08

that deep man :( but nice work :)
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Postby TiFFany08 » Aug 3rd, '06, 03:15

its pretty good great job
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Postby rhiannon » Aug 3rd, '06, 08:43

thanx every1
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Postby Rae » Aug 15th, '06, 18:05

that was nice! :D keep up tha good work :smoking:
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Postby Coccoa » Aug 15th, '06, 18:26

Naw when i hear female raps i prefer some "fuck me good" Lil Kim shit.
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Postby rhiannon » Aug 18th, '06, 19:32

thanx man :)
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