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For my Love

Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 18th, '06, 20:08

This is dedicated to my girl,
Start Time : 20:56..
End Time : 21 : 13.

[Intro] A lot of people don't take me serious. Cause i'm only 13.
But my feelings are enough to write these things.. so take the time to read it.[Intro]

[Chorus]
I love you,, you can trust me, i want to divide the same feelings,
Just say that you love me ,,
[Chorus]

Girl, i love you, why u don't me ? am i that bad ?
I never had the courage to say it, just after 3 months,
But those feelings are not the same, i have to accept that,

Cause i respect you, i accept you feelings,
I look at you, when i do that i'm starting to blush,
just aks yourself, would i give him a chance ?
just one shot,, try it,

You are everything to me, u make me crazy,
I wanna scream it out, but i can't, i don't know why,
I wanna feel you in my arms, but i'm affraid, i think that that never will hapen,

thats the moment i start to cry, the tears are leaking over my cheeks,
I'm now that i'm not perfect, but just give me a chance, i want you,
my feelings are pure, they are wild, they gonna fly to you,

You can let me do everything, at the moment i look into your eyes,,
I'm waiting every day of,, til the day that u give me a chance,

[Chorus]
I love you,, you can trust me, i want to divide the same feelings,
Just say that you love me ,,
[Chorus]

i'm just gonna collapse, i'm gonna fall on my knies,
Begging that you love me, but feelings susposed to be there natural,
So just make a choice, maybe i can forget you with the time,,
Last edited by .Giorgo. on Aug 19th, '06, 21:41, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 18th, '06, 20:16

better and better and better keep it up :D
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 18th, '06, 20:20

Bar wrote:better and better and better keep it up :D

Thx, this stuff was actually a request for Joyce.
I'm gonna ad audio to it, but first i'm gonna make it longer.

Thx for Feedback, Bar.
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Postby Rae » Aug 18th, '06, 20:31

Bar wrote:better and better and better keep it up :D


yup i agree ... u just keep gettin better and better!
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