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Keystyle - Smile

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 19th, '06, 03:39

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come on baby just smile , a wanne see your lips curl up not down,
i want you to know you'll always have love while im around,
all i wanne do is see you smile , so a know your happy by my side ,
so i know you like the way i ride , so a know you like the way a glide,
al im asking for you to do is smile , come on baby just smile .
come one its easy to do and uses less muscle ,
what ,you know im not trying to hustle,
i just wanne see yer lips glimmer ,
it makes ma spine shivver ,
makes ma toes quivver ,
gives em a warm feeling inside , when you beside ,
stop acting like a child , come on baby just smile...


just a little something....feedback :D ?
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 19th, '06, 03:54

dude that's pretty good !!!
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