Keystyle :- ANGER

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commence fixing spelling mistakes:20:33
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move bitch get out of my way , before i end you life today,
coz im sick of feeling like , dam i miss you , so im joost gonni diss you,
you kisses are wack , and you dress like you names jack ,
and you smell like you had bout 10 ounce a crack ,
im letting out this anger so i can go back ,
to the way it was , im at a loss ,
anger and me dont go well together ,
but you knew that , you know me like your ma mother ,
you can read me like im the next big novel ,
but the love a have for you is making me topple,
im about to blow , im about to go , im about to explode,
coz a cant take it no more i need you in ma life or a need you to die ,
coz i cannot go on living this fucking lie ,
come on tell me why , why do you torture me , why did you cheat ,
why does he sweep you off your feet , is he better than me ,
coz he a fighter , goin around with weopons like he on mortal kombat ,
cant be that , has he got a bigger dick...no stop quick , remember i didnt use you like that 3 month and i didnt try it once , wanted it to be your choice
but it was that that got me done.,
coz in the end you shagged another guy , i dont even think if a wanne know why , but anywae goodbye.....

[Rae]

wow Bar that is really good! really really good ... lol ... great job!

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

wow Bar that is really good! really really good ... lol ... great job!

thank you

[Rae]

wow Bar that is really good! really really good ... lol ... great job!

thank you

no problem

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B.U.M.P

anymore feedback on dis ?

[stevethetruth]

damn dude i really like this one
loving the rhymes lol

[DC4952]

nice. i like it