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Postby Rae » Aug 21st, '06, 17:38

a true friend,
a true friend is someone thats there in the end,
threw thick and thin,
someone you can call in the middle of the day,
just to say hey,
someone you can give relationship advice to,
and give high fives to,
someone you can go shopping with,
and afterwards knock a couple back and kick it with,
someone you can call when you have a bad day,
and when you talk to them you know everything will be ok,
i know i have many "true friends",
and im very thankful,
becuz i dunno what i would do without u guys!


i wrote this one lastnite b/c sumthing happened to one of my friends ... and i tried to put it into sumthing ... but this is all i came up with ... (not to great) :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 21st, '06, 20:05

MarshellBM wrote:someone you can call when you have a bad day,
and when you talk to them you know everything will be ok,


my favorite rhyme

keep it up!! :D
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Re: True Friends

Postby Rae » Aug 21st, '06, 20:08

steverocks88 wrote:
MarshellBM wrote:someone you can call when you have a bad day,
and when you talk to them you know everything will be ok,


my favorite rhyme

keep it up!! :D


thank you thank you very much! :D lol ... i love that ur so easy on me when u give me feedback :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 21st, '06, 20:22

yeh the 2 lines steve quoted are sweet nice :d
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Postby Rae » Aug 21st, '06, 20:28

Bar wrote:yeh the 2 lines steve quoted are sweet nice :d


thank you! i love it when u and steve leave feedback!!! :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 21st, '06, 20:31

you know ill hit you feedback :D coz i know what its liek to post and get none its annoying lol
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Postby Rae » Aug 21st, '06, 20:46

Bar wrote:you know ill hit you feedback :D coz i know what its liek to post and get none its annoying lol


yeah i know what u mean! :D thanks u rock!
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 22nd, '06, 01:34

MarshellBM wrote:
Bar wrote:you know ill hit you feedback :D coz i know what its liek to post and get none its annoying lol


yeah i know what u mean! :D thanks u rock!


yep same here and.....it .......sucks....lol
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Postby Lil Pimp Tell 'Em » Aug 22nd, '06, 01:57

:worship: i like it alot :p

its a bit short :sweating: but i still love it :smoking:

ive read most of ya rhymes, and ur improving :thumbsup:
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Postby Rae » Aug 22nd, '06, 15:22

thank you :wave: ... yeah im just not good at making long ones b/c i tend to go off topic alot ... so i try to keep the sorta short ... it looks shorter when i type it tho (which sucks) :tounge2: lol ... but yeah thank you :D
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