Come On!!!

[stevethetruth]

it's called Come On it sort of like a club banger lol
please leave feedback!!


Come on Come on Come on Let's Go!!
Come on Come on Come on Let's Go!!
Come on Come on Come on Let's Go!!
Come on Come on Come on Let's Go!!
Ahha that's right the truth's in the house
Ahha that's right the truth's in the house
Come on Ayo here we go now


I want you to throw your hands in the air
Just wave em back and forth like you dont care
Im not asking you here this is a dare
I dont care why you came or why youre here
I just want you to root for the best rapper you hear
Otherwise leave dont go anywhere near
This rocking place thats got hip hop in the bass
You would know if youve had great taste
You wouldve embraced every line Ive said in the first place
Im just free styling here its just fate
And no Ive got nothing on my plate
Cause The truths my name its what I state

Come on wave your hands up in here
Comon clap em hard show me you care
Cause the style I spit is so rare
Come a little closer have no fear
Make some noise for the best one here
Cause Ill never leave Ill always be there (repeat)

When Im performing dont just stand
I want you to scream and say hell yeah
Because this rap goes out to all I know
Without the criticism Id have no flow
Without you guys I would never know
Whats right from wrong and what doesnt go along
And this goes for every time Im writing a song
Oh well whatever I guess Im back in the groove
And right now theres nothing better to do
Except yell to the crowd a thing or two
This is the song for you guys so just clap
Cause without you people Id be nowhere hmmp
Without the fans I wouldve given up rap
And be stuck at a minimum wage making crap
So show me your there wave those hands in air
Show me you care lets feel the love in the air

Come on wave your hands up in here
Comon clap em hard show me you care
Cause the style I spit is so rare
Come a little closer have no fear
Make some noise for the best one here
Cause Ill never leave Ill always be there (repeat)


Ha ha thats right Ill never leave this spot
I never will Not till I melted the pot
Youve never heard a sound oh so hot
For as long as I live Ill never stop
As long as you hear me Im always on top
Of the charts man I will never flop
Ill never release a cd that sounds like slop
So unlike you Ill give it all Ive got
Unlike you Ill give all my might
Cause I dont ever wanna give up this mic
So just do me a favor right now right here

Come on wave your hands up in here
Comon clap em hard show me you care
Cause the style I spit is so rare
Come a little closer have no fear
Make some noise for the best one here
Cause Ill never leave Ill always be there (repeat)

[die2nite]

Pretty good, rhymes are simple, but then again it's a clubbanger. Has a nice and consistent flow to it though.

[stevethetruth]

Pretty good, rhymes are simple, but then again it's a clubbanger. Has a nice and consistent flow to it though.

yeah i've been trying to step up my rhyme game lol

thanks for the feedback!!

[katastrophe]

nice job steve-o, lol im workin on a club banger too and im hopin it turns out good. keep it up man

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

nice man but you shouldnt try do club-bangers to often your better at you other style but still nice

[stevethetruth]

nice job steve-o, lol im workin on a club banger too and im hopin it turns out good. keep it up man

cool man i hope that comes out good lol
thanks for the feedback

[stevethetruth]

nice man but you shouldnt try do club-bangers to often your better at you other style but still nice

yep i totaly agree that i'm better at the other style but the whole point of this song was to expand my style and try to reach different crowds ya know
and to try and write a club banger and have one on the mixtape i'm making

btw thanks for the feedback

[Rae]

i like it! its really good! it was a nice change (club-bangers) ... it was good but i still like ur love stuff betta lol

[stevethetruth]

i like it! its really good! it was a nice change (club-bangers) ... it was good but i still like ur love stuff betta lol

yeah i think everyone does lmao

[stevethetruth]

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[C-Game]

its another club banger im hung like a clif hanger
get the reverbs incresead and burn up the flangers
the arctic is melting from the flow coz ur rhymes hot
guess whos back on the mic its my homie steverocks

[stevethetruth]

its another club banger im hung like a clif hanger
get the reverbs incresead and burn up the flangers
the arctic is melting from the flow coz ur rhymes hot
guess whos back on the mic its my homie steverocks

damn dude thanks lol awesome lol