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i need you girl

Postby C-Game » Aug 24th, '06, 17:17

i go to campus with my friends and i just come home SEE
then this loneliness unfolds and it kinda comforts ME
while i lay back chillin thinkin about my f***ed up PAST
regretting certain moments with some jumped up LASS
now they all gone equivalent to a flame in the WIND
maybe im symbolic as the wind and now it aint blowin WITHIN
i make booty calls to one girl as she keeps doin to ME
i wana ask her out and we talk abt love & RESPONSIBILITY
i dont wanna jeopardize this wonderful friendship like THAT
maybe im feelin insecure about my judgments i make in a SNAP
even though i find her fun, lovin and close, but SERIOUSLY
this uncertain feelin i have keeps hauntin me IMMEDIATELY
and the phone conversations are like an everyday OCCURENCE
each time i build up the guts im withholdin like IM ON A FENCE
one day i told her that i love her and want her as my OWN
but i hv said it to my self after she kept the PHONE


now it aint abt raw lust just a boys and a girls TRUST
for some its a must to hv one night stands to blow like a GUST
but this heavenly topic that runs under the topic of LOVE
neither one of us wants to initiate this ever promising VOW
where do i stand in this mix im tangled in this spider WEB
so i portray a rough exterior which cldnt be penetrated by LEAD
my feelings are kept as a treasure of love in my HEART
i dont know how to quit or even just how to START
how can i find the leading end of this web which is TANGLED
cld my heart survive a blow and even turn more MANGLED
or elect for the bachelor life with no one to SHARE
am i thinkin this is a sweet dream disguised as a nightMARE
i cant understand her inside or even read her FEELINGS
y isnt she reveling and y is she keep on CONCEALING
i question this silence barrier that separates YOU AND I
i wanna love you forever and everyday keep it JUVENILE
lets face facts its not gonna work coz of the COMPLICATIONS
maybe you have ur own reasons and i have my OBLIGATIONS
im inking this poem to you my darling with tears in my EYES
i hope my prayers are answered as i keep praying to the SKIES
after you read this i know things aint gonna be the same AGAIN
so im stayin away from you forever, and im late i have to catch a PLANE
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Postby Rae » Aug 24th, '06, 17:34

good job :D ! it was good! and long ... im bad @ makin long stuff! but ... yeah... ur gettin good! :D
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Postby C-Game » Aug 24th, '06, 17:51

thnkx
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 24th, '06, 19:09

nice work man :D
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Postby sinemm » Aug 24th, '06, 22:08

thats nice has some really good rhymes :) congs
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