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I'll eat you alive (no where near finished)

Postby stevethetruth » Aug 25th, '06, 06:39

Chorus:
Look I
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Postby DOPE » Aug 25th, '06, 08:07

i liked it

my fav line
So dawg just shake my hand oh yeah and shut it when I
"It's amazing that the amount of news that happens in the world every day always just exactly fits the newspaper."

My basic disk will make you take a razor to your wrist
Make you satanistic
Make you take the pistol to your face
N place the clip N cock it back
N let it go until your brains are rippin out your skull so bad
To sew you back would be a waste of stitches

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 25th, '06, 11:51

nice :D and it no where near dun but so far nice but does need more work ( whitch itll reiceive lol )
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 25th, '06, 14:17

thanks for the feedback guys :D
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Postby C-Game » Aug 25th, '06, 14:18

i wanna eat you alive since da day u arive
coz im living a lie in which bitch u kurnived

he he
keep it up stevie
waitin for the final one
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 25th, '06, 14:29

thanks man :happy:
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 25th, '06, 20:06

b..u..m..p..
leave some FEEDBACK!! PLEASE!!
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