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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 26th, '06, 00:24

this isnt a keystle this is ma feelings,
drunk as a motherfucker girls were reeling,
yeh reeling me in tonight ma feelings went cazy ,
so many feeling a felt like a junky,
coz girls say they'll meet me but dont show,
any girl a like has another man yeh know,
coz they fuckd me up big time ya see,
i finally got over ma last love,
the new girls are already fucking me up,
a wish a had a girl like rae,
talk staright to ya face,
likes the stuff a like, dont think am gay,
this aint a rap this is just me,
things a need to get off ma chest ,
things a just got to confess,
like how ave loved nicole since a bin 13 ,
still sorta do, to me she always be a queen ,
but noboddy else no what a mean,
a loved her with ma whole fucking heart,
fuck man,dont even let me start ,
a got new girls on ma self, but a dunno if the feel me aswell,
one said she meet but she didnt, other one a seen but she got a sort man on her side,
but beside that she the perfect girl, i like everything about her aswell,
still wish a had a girl like rae, who a can tae tae,
about ma raps and ma feelings, if you read this rae,
remember a love you as a freind ok,
ill tell you again this aint a rap a peom or a lecture ,
this is ma feelings and my life right now just respect-ya,
sorry if am babling on probly just looks like attention seeking ,
but im drunk right now and a need a girl to talk to about ma feelings,
rae aint on and no other girl be feeling..........

exactly what i said up there ^^^
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 26th, '06, 01:24

damn kid anytime you wanna talk just let me know

anytime man anytime....


don't let anyone stop you from anything man!!!
http://www.myspace.com/stevethetruth <-- my myspace add me!!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 26th, '06, 01:27

steverocks88 wrote:damn kid anytime you wanna talk just let me know

anytime man anytime....


don't let anyone stop you from anything man!!!


thx alot man :D your real great freind :D
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