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i love u and i want u back

Postby C-Game » Aug 24th, '06, 16:44

do I miss u? , missed the kiss u issue, when i pick YOU
i could have diss u so bad, but cute baby still i insist YOU
to pay attention give it some thought about what went WRONG
and understand the miss understandments that just went UPON
how come when the bogus stories were flowing in u were so CREDULOUS
its aggravated so bad baby, your my life source your just FABULOUS
even though dark clouds cover the sky, eventually the sun would SHINE
spreading the light like what we had that
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Postby rhiannon » Aug 26th, '06, 18:37

wow its good....there's some nice rhymes in there
who ever u wrote dat too's lucky lol...nice tho its sweet
I LIKE SLIMMY
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Postby sinemm » Aug 26th, '06, 19:55

yeas..thats nice and good rhymes.. :)
LIFE WOULD BE A MISTAKE WITHOUT MUSIC!!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 26th, '06, 20:10

real nice rythmes great work cgame
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