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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 29th, '06, 17:03

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Fuckin' Feelings

I love u, my brain and my feelings love you.
But i don't wanna love you, never.
I hate you, buy me feelings love you.
I don't want you in my life.
I hate you, you hurted me.
But i can't forget you, why not ?
I was crying, but i still love you.
I'm affraid that i never forget you.

Just get outta my mind, get outta my head.
I wanna go on with my life.. without you.
I just wanna be a normal guy.
I want another girl, not you, get away.
I'l see you every day at school.
I want an other school, without you..
I can't forget you as long i'l see you.
But when does this stops. in an other life ?
U cheated me, don't expect an other chance.
But when i see your eyes, covered with water.
I can't say no, cause i can't hurt a girl.
Cause i gotta keep myself strong and say no..

Get outta my life Girl, goodbye..
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Postby rhiannon » Aug 29th, '06, 17:05

that was cool...i kinda kno that feelin too :whistle: it was good :happy:
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Postby sinemm » Aug 29th, '06, 17:32

it sounds like it really happend or still happening..?
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Postby .Giorgo. » Aug 29th, '06, 19:20

It's indeed really happened. Al my songs/poems are almoust real happened.
I write those better. Thx for the feed, rhiannon and sinemm
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Postby sinemm » Aug 29th, '06, 19:54

.Giorgo. wrote:It's indeed really happened. Al my songs/poems are almoust real happened.
I write those better. Thx for the feed, rhiannon and sinemm


o ic so thats abit sad..but lotsa ppl has some experiences like that..(includin me.at the past)

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