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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 31st, '06, 05:22

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Postby katastrophe » Aug 31st, '06, 06:01

the last three lines are kinda iffy. idk..its something about it but overall is really good. nice job steve
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Postby sinemm » Aug 31st, '06, 09:47

yea its nice..when i think it has a audio it sounds cool to me :)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 31st, '06, 12:59

nice saem as katastrophe really last 3 lines are a little weird rest of its kool :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 31st, '06, 14:54

thanks for the feedback guys yeah i kind of agree with you all about the last three lines lol
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Postby stevethetruth » Aug 31st, '06, 19:42

yo it's updated check it out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby Rae » Aug 31st, '06, 20:29

wow i like it! its really really good! :D

and im say "keep it up steve" just like u tell me! :D
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