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My Turn

Postby Lo~Key » Sep 3rd, '06, 05:16

Fellow tr artists, N members, males N females alike. Please stand, you bout to get the privelage to see the infamous Lo~Key in action.... make sum noise!

[verse1]
Eminem, naw I'm just light skin blessed to flow
things I preform make rap stars stressed to know
no doupt in my head I know peeps bumpin my shit
became obvious when I fell into top 10 hits
causin rebellion with lyrics, you know what it is
you might have it good, but you ain't got this
passin street lights bumpin sum G-Unit gotta luv that
starin at 50 Cent bumpin my shit in his cadillac
I'm world wide, came from nothin to Extreme
niggaz who rapped for 50 years know what I meen
know I'm God blessed, sent to earth with a message
it ain't just talent, the Priest said it's called Blessage

[Hook]
y'all bitches had ya chance but now it's over
Lo~Key rushin in keepin it all just rollin
tr stand up, now sit the fuck down
Lo~Key around N don't bitch cuz it's my turn

[Verse2]
I see these rap stars on T.V takin notes then flippin styles
joinin boardz to be heard rap battlin OG'z skippin mildz
N Lord knows it hurt me when I see what happened wit 50 N Game
done seen the whole Pac N Biggie thing history happenin the same
East, West, Durty South... I'm from the North, Mansfield Quebec Canada
so these beefs don't bother me at all man
I hear sum shit, judge it like it's a gurl, Hot or Not
cuz time's wastin, gotta move quick N reach the top
hustle out my words my thoughts, bein arrested cuz it can be used as a drug
I see life a lil different, so don't think gunz when I speak thug
livin through this struggle, sick of niggaz talkin shit N not knowin shit
things like this'll get another bitches ass hit

[Hook]
y'all bitches had ya chance but now it's over
Lo~Key rushin in keepin it all just rollin
tr stand up, now sit the fuck down
Lo~Key around N don't bitch cuz it's my turn
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Postby Lo~Key » Sep 3rd, '06, 06:00

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Postby Lo~Key » Sep 3rd, '06, 06:55

lol.... I don't use the "N" word badly, it's as a overall, I call white, Latin, Mexican, any body a "N"..... I use it as a general.
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Postby Evil_Deedz666 » Sep 3rd, '06, 06:57

Thats Was Aight Kid :8)
Not to bad!! :happy:
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Postby Lo~Key » Sep 3rd, '06, 07:38

lol aiight Angie

N thnx Evil Deedz
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 3rd, '06, 15:31

you a name dropper.......6 big arstists in 2 verses....but the rythms nice man kee it up
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