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write til my hand hurts

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write til my hand hurts

Postby Vengeance » Sep 3rd, '06, 18:29

i want to write until my hand hurts,
but im not sure what to write about,
i cant find the right words,
but how can i not, in this kind of world?
theres so much drama going on,
rapes, crimes, murders, poverty, war
how can i not see wahts going on?
why is it happening and what for?
i have nothing to say or write,
coz i dont look around me,,
anythind could happen to me when im asleep at night,
i can never see why people have so much fright,
maybe because i only think of myself and be so selfish,
an angry human with a mind so devilish,
one day when it happens to me
maybe i'll realise what is going on,
i'll experience the truth
and not like the truth.
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Postby Rae » Sep 3rd, '06, 18:32

it was good! good job! :D

keep it up! :D
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