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write til my hand hurts Part 2

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write til my hand hurts Part 2

Postby Vengeance » Sep 3rd, '06, 18:36

i want to write until my hands hurt,
but i dont know what,
but suddenly felt the passion,
to write down what i feel,
for real i feel like crying,
ive been put in a place,
and dont know what to do,
maybe its the lack of sleep,
these past few weeks,
i broke down and cried,
the heat of my tears runnin down my cheeks,
and the constant sound of my crying,
finally helped me go to sleep.
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Postby Rae » Sep 3rd, '06, 18:40

Good job! :d
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