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Dont Mess Wit Me

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Dont Mess Wit Me

Postby Rae » Sep 8th, '06, 20:13

R A to tha E
You girls betta not mess wit me
cause i'll hit ya in tha face
so hard you'll have to wear a neck brace
and this aint a faze
i've acted like this since my first days
so dont cross my path
or your gonna be gettin sponge baths
so watch you back
becuz you betta believe i'll be there with a bat
make sure you lock your door
cause i'll be there fo' sho
if i ever see ya close your eyeys
ima give ya a suprise
so dont cross me becuz im tha big R A E
so im tellin you now
you betta lower that brow
and be ready to buck


i know its not that great! but i was bored! :D
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Postby stevethetruth » Sep 8th, '06, 20:40

your gonna give me a sponge bath YAY!!! lmao jk jk


ummm i really liked this one too you are getting better
you ROCK!!!! :D
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Re: Dont Mess Wit Me

Postby BaZZ » Sep 8th, '06, 20:41

Rae wrote:R A to tha E
You girls betta not mess wit me
cause i'll hit ya in tha face
so hard you'll have to wear a neck brace
and this aint a faze
i've acted like this since my first days
so dont cross my path
or your gonna be gettin sponge baths
so watch you back
becuz you betta believe i'll be there with a bat
make sure you lock your door
cause i'll be there fo' sho
if i ever see ya close your eyeys
ima give ya a suprise
so dont cross me becuz im tha big R A E
so im tellin you now
you betta lower that brow
and be ready to buck


i know its not that great! but i was bored! :D


aaaaaahhh! *lowers brow and runs away* :laughing: :laughing:
good rhyme there :p
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Postby Rae » Sep 8th, '06, 20:45

lol steve i didnt mean i was gonna give u one! lmao

and thanx both of u ... :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 8th, '06, 22:39

was ok :whistle: lol you getting better though :D
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Postby Block » Sep 9th, '06, 05:34

G_killa wrote:cause i'll hit ya in tha face
so hard you'll have to wear a neck brace

:laughing: love it hahahahahhahaa

not bad how long u been doin it for?



writing or giving spongs baths? haha.
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