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Rhyme: Too good to live

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Rhyme: Too good to live

Postby Tomega » Sep 30th, '05, 21:39

[chorus 2x]
My life is easy, much too good
My style is exactly the wa it should
My life aint hard, much too quite
My style is certainly not to fight

[verse]
my life is easy man, just calm shit
I hope I become succesful the way my parents did
Dont need money, but like it when i git
It's almost certain that's there's day me and my girlfriend meet
what i mean, my life is going so smooth, it seems its all planned
But i dont forget to look to the life of friends
Some dudes have some trouble
and when they aint got 1 problem, the trouble is double
One mate has no decent home
Almost like a rolling stone
He lives far away, can only talk to him by phone
So when he feels alone, he must solve it on his own
And his life sets the tone,
of the life of another mate, who's mam was ill
Not able to do a thing, or a moment to chill
She died now, released of her pain
But buddy's life will never be the same
Sometimes it's a shame the way i feel
Cause im so terrible happy, well it IS a big deal
Im not worried to pay a hundred bills
but in an other world ppl are ready to kill
for just a bottle of water, box of food
So i doubt the way im living my life
and think about poor ppl when i cut meat with a knife
And i know its not my fault ppl are dieing
but im not the one who is in shit and is crying
All i can do is see ppl fighting
The only way to express that is to sit down and writing
Hope of day everyone feels great
man, i think sometimes why the fuck do i hate?
i feel fucked when my bike is stolen
while ppl are suffering of there disease
and have no family or friends to see
when they're down or sad
AAARGH it makes me fucking mad!

[chorus 2x]
My life is easy, much too good
My style is exactly the wa it should
My life aint hard, much too quite
My style is certainly not to fight
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Postby yoshi » Sep 30th, '05, 21:42

i really like it, last verse made me laugh ;)
AAARGH it makes me fucking mad!


but good job man :D
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Postby Coccoa » Sep 30th, '05, 21:49

I am all touched. :cry:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 30th, '05, 21:55

wow.
that was great and very touching :cry:
keep it up man. :D
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Postby Coccoa » Sep 30th, '05, 22:06

Not too gangsta tho.

Put some caps and heat and guns in it and bitches goin both ways and it ll be perfect. And lolos of course.
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Postby Tomega » Sep 30th, '05, 22:07

haha no coz i like to keep it real
and guns aint me
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Postby Coccoa » Sep 30th, '05, 22:10

Good. Ok you keep it real. I ll go pack a pump and keep it gangsta.

I got a straight bitch in the telly going both ways
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Postby HAYZI » Sep 30th, '05, 22:17

thats nice shit man the second of your raps to touch me,
keep it up :wink:
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Postby j_shady » Oct 1st, '05, 15:54

that shit is really tight, keep up the good work
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Postby 4D » Oct 1st, '05, 16:11

Great job Tomega, a very touching human rhyme. Don`t be anything you`re not, too many fake people in this world, never see me actin like a gangsta, know why........Cos i ain`t one!
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Postby B.A.D. » Oct 2nd, '05, 06:09

^^^^ were u been?? *fordie*
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