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Postby Mc Cubz » Sep 19th, '06, 23:57

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 20th, '06, 00:03

ok man ya need to post it weres it redeable i keep losing my place and geting confused....put it in wordpad and make it eiser to read then re post it
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Re: clarky n cubz on a freestlye brap brap lol

Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 20th, '06, 00:14

hahah that was crazy. some great lines in there.
and here this may be more readable
red=cubz
green=clarky


I'm a killer on record but not the criminal type,
I'm almost myrical-like in a lyrical fight

and now your lyrically tight like a dyke or a young virgin
I always knew you could spit deadly shit now I see the guns emergin
I come burning, you spit shit like a rat thats from vermin
have you swervig screaming about to sleep like your under a surgeon

I'm an urgent craze with listeners, you'd be crazed to try dissin' us
Pissin' us off and you'll be leavin in a box, family greiving over ya loss
pray over the cross or you'll be meetin' satan,
coz i got heat just waitin' , to be makin your mum takin you to crematin' you

shes eating jake n clarky cos you mum gets kinda frisky
everwhere I go she follows us and swallows us like a gyspy
I fight tipsy clarks probs high on some drugs and shit
were cold sick mcs always come eqquiped

My trips be on drugs but never on holiday, a bottle a day, poppin' away,
throtle a gay, stop in my way and you'll drop like..............(i got stuck)

how've ya gotten this way, I thought you were asking for advise
now your mastering this vice, leaving mcs hungry like theyre fasting for life

the advice of christ coz i'm precise with a knife
slice ya lungs open, guns smokin,

we have to fight, you have to bite, dyke time to pass the mic
why did ya talk about guns smoking
dusnt matter anyway im not concentrating cos I got that guy's mum choking

lol
the suns hopin' to stay coz i'm the new source of heat to stay

in the heat of play she kneeled and lay and begged for me to say
anal today, but prepare woman cos 17 inches are coming aiming your way
gonna be felt like im bin larden airways aiming your planes
straight for your anal canal, but I feel bad cos I just played your gyal
I ment to say I'm cheating over your missus, I shouldnt use slang
Its not my fault your momma made me choose to bang

i bang tracks harder than a railway builder, i come back after i've killed ya
filled you with holes like you was a wall and i drilled ya

filled ya mum, with a film of cum, all this seamens killed our love
and I'm feel just as hurt that shes bleeding from the 17 inches that filled her muff
so I drilled your mum just encase your didnt quite grasp the imagery
I'm like a sik massive gun ye that keeps flowing so I blasy for infinity

I'll slap you silly G, don't be thinkin' that I'll back down,
I'll leave you as a skeleton, like a bitch that lacks pounds

put the crack down, cos I'm back around, you should jus be suicidal
were your newest rivals who got you hurt when you realise whoes your idol

do is i pill, 6 at a time, sniffin' a line of coke but i still wont have no rhymes n choke
I'm a bloke, Like you, We rhyme to choke, we dont like you
im listning to insomnia faithless, were both rappers, but gotta admit thats a nice tune

like that track i will crack your back so you cnat get no sleep,
rep those geeks, but I stay wrecked all week

so dont test me and g sorry I interupted before, but we'll make them look to abort
I had my mind on something else like the phone to book my hook
got some cold punches the type to crush ya jaw
oh yo I gota stop, cos you look - THE DOOR
that bitch has arrived, time to bed that hooker
got my head stuk in her cos Im a pussy lover, shit I sed I lover
but yo trust she a right dead stunner
best bum in the, whole world, better than dat biaatch fuk j lo
make j lo;s ahole look gay yo, with two cheeks lppkin like potatoes

lol
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I still rap better than you.

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 20th, '06, 00:17

dam some nice shit there man :D nice work both of yous :smoking:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 20th, '06, 00:23

Clarky wrote:Cheers^


I still really wanna improve at freestyle, but I think it's somethin' you have to be born with :(


it aint i couldnt freestyle for shit now im just ok at it... ( i can actually doa full beat now before i couldnt do 2 bars ) practice on text...seriously write then when you get stumped stop you end up writing faster untill you just say it and dont need to write it down.....i got 2 freestyles unrealeased ofcourse
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 20th, '06, 00:26

Clarky wrote:I've never actually tried recording freestyles.


I might try that. Then when i think one is good enough, I can upload it.


my tip take a beat you have never heard before lsiten to it twice push record and go :sweating:
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Postby Mc Cubz » Sep 22nd, '06, 17:55

Clarky wrote:I'll try that sometime thanks :D


yo this is abit of an inpropriate place to say this but chek u out clarky about a million posts lol - your guna be the next tr lol, so ur not onli a sick freestyler but a dedicated tr comrade brap brap spk soon bro
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