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Goodbye Friday (Your Forgotten Love)

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Goodbye Friday (Your Forgotten Love)

Postby Inzanity » Sep 22nd, '06, 21:49

I know I haven't posted a song in here in a long time and I'm supposed to be postin' audio's soon but I'm kind of nervous to post an audio cause' I'm not sure if any of u will like it. Hopefully u will I've never posted audio's b4 mabey I'll make this an audio too anyway I hope u like this song. I wrote it yesterday when I found out that my ex was about to have a kid wit some1 else and well u could never know how feel about my ex it's just one of those relationships that u never get over u know wat I mean plus after I found out my ex was talkin' about how we should get back 2gether and I was like there is no way I'ma get back wit u when u about to have a kid wit some1 I ain't a home recker. well let me know wat u think I'll be postin' another one up tomarrow or later this week too




(Verse 1)
ur the 1 mistake I'm glad I made
ur the 1 mistake I don't regret
If givin' the chance I'd do it again
cause' ur the 1 love my heart won't let me forget
but now u've ripped my heart right out of my chest
and left me in this unbareable pain
I'll never love again like I did back then
u've ruined my chance of ever lovin' again
I can't imagine myself with any1 else
not if that some1 just isn't u
we both made mistakes
but everything I did well u did it too

(Pre-course)
I just can't believe this is happening
I'll never have ur love like I had it then
I wish I could go back again
I wish I could go back to then
I wish I could go back to when

(Course)
back to when u were mine
back to that place in time
when the world was are's
and I was in ur arm's
but all that has perished now
I'm just ur forgotten love
so now it's time that I say
goodbye to friday

(Verse 2)
u tore my soul right out of my heart
and left me in the cold of a world so dark
I've come to realize that it's actually over
we'll never have the love that love we could've had
and I'll always remember u as the future I should've had
but it's to late cause' I let my future walk away from me
and now I'm left with just the memories
of what will never be but in the words of Nick Lachey
You can have what's left of me

(Pre-course)
I just can't believe this is happening
I'll never have ur love like I had it then
I wish I could go back again
I wish I could go back to then
I wish I could go back to when

(Course)
back to when u were mine
back to that place in time
when the world was are's
and I was in ur arm's
but all that has perished now
I'm just ur forgotten love
so now it's time that I say
goodbye to friday

(Verse 3)
I remember that night we met at the skatin' rink in the spring of 2003
when u asked me out I never imagined some1 like u goin' out wit me
for a year and 4 months I gave u my love, my heart and my soul
but now I have to say goodbye my love I know it's hard but I'm lettin' go
but before I do babe I just have to know y did u have to go
and have a baby with some1 new, when u know how much I'm in love with u
and I know that deep down in the depth's of ur soul u love me too
but I can't take u back so I guess we're done, we're through

(Pre-course)
I just can't believe this is happening
I'll never have ur love like I had it then
I wish I could go back again
I wish I could go back to then
I wish I could go back to when

(Course)
back to when u were mine
back to that place in time
when the world was are's
and I was in ur arm's
but all that has perished now
I'm just ur forgotten love
so now it's time that I say
goodbye to friday
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 22nd, '06, 22:22

the chorus/pre chorus alot :D verses are nice to but whats with not rythming all lines ?
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Postby Inzanity » Sep 22nd, '06, 23:49

Bar wrote:whats with not rythming all lines ?


I've been doin' that alot lately it's just a new style I'm tryin'.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 22nd, '06, 23:59

EmptyPromises wrote:
Bar wrote:whats with not rythming all lines ?


I've been doin' that alot lately it's just a new style I'm tryin'.


fair enough though id need to hear audio to give feed on that :sweating: :D
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