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Youth (new song might change name)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 19th, '06, 22:55

Verse1
i dont listen to what people say about the youth these days,
underage sex , drinking , violence , wars , you lernt us these ways,
if im the one to blame for my fucked up mind-frame,
then what about the on that learnt me this game,
all im trying to do is protect myself,
we all targets lined up in one big shelf,
when something fucks up you just blame a youth,
blame yourself come on start to tell the truth,
this is my hate rap to the people above,
not all brains are as precious as a white dove,
some are twisted and evil, violent thoguhts in there head,
then everyone is shocked when the find the step dad dead,
everyone take a look at me instead , a speak the truth in am words,
i fought of the evil i aint getin done by no curse,
but ma words are getting quieter and weaker,
i fear for the show of the grim reaper,

Chorus
Do you feel this pain and suffer when were tryna make it
youths this generation just need to take it
fight for what you beileive in dont ever back down
dont be intimadated coz you aint got the crownn
Do you feel this pain and suffer when were tryna make it
youths this generation just need to take it
fight for what you beileive in dont ever back down
dont be intimadated coz you aint got the crown

Verse2
I fight for what a beileive in and i dont give,
random raps of the past this is how i wanna live,
sptting ma words for a living,
like i sais i wont give in,
rythming my words till the end of time,
hope to survive or itll be the end of mine,
dont cry just look to the sky, think about the beat and the rythm,
thats what i got to do , but i aint looking at the sky for you,
i look coz its bright clear blue ,its pure the whole way through,
the way ma rythms make you think , you think you back in school,
im giving out a royal teaching , youll recive a royal beating,
if you dont like ma tracks dont be come a hater,
i had one , and one track, see you later,
the power in my speach , you just can reach,
ill say it again im only 15 years old,
in 5 years think the power ill hold,

Chorus
Do you feel this pain and suffer when were tryna make it
youths this generation just need to take it
fight for what you beileive in dont ever back down
dont be intimadated coz you aint got the crownn
Do you feel this pain and suffer when were tryna make it
youths this generation just need to take it
fight for what you beileive in dont ever back down
dont be intimadated coz you aint got the crown

Verse 3
do you feel fear , do you fell pain ,
are you a man , do you fear this game,
do you have the balls to put you deepest feelings in a song,
i only got the balls bout half a month ago , aint had them long,
but im perfecting my style , some still call me a child,
but im spitting rawer than a mainstream,
ma words make you chill like a icecream,
you can sit back and just listen to flow,
make you brain think and you body go,
your soul is the deepest part of you so ive been told,
so i aint rapping no more it my soul , ive left hold ,
i write and i dont stop like i cant be caught,
i know i aint near great but some say i rock,
how can you like ma simple rythmed words,
when others hitting multis every verse,
other go gangsta saying youll end up in herse,
that aint a diss im just speaking my thoughts, im a good or not,

Chorus
Do you feel this pain and suffer when were tryna make it
youths this generation just need to take it
fight for what you beileive in dont ever back down
dont be intimadated coz you aint got the crownn
Do you feel this pain and suffer when were tryna make it
youths this generation just need to take it
fight for what you beileive in dont ever back down
dont be intimadated coz you aint got the crown


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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 20th, '06, 01:35

BUMP

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 21st, '06, 12:39

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GIVE FEED!!!!!!! :angry: ;) :worship: :sweating: :smoking:
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Postby BaZZ » Sep 22nd, '06, 06:17

i think its cool dawg... like it alot :smoking:
"Hard hearted beast with a jaw full of meat
Engulfed in a feast while you starve at his feet
He toss you the least little portion of a piece
To the floor and expect you to rejoice when you eat" - Brother Ali
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 22nd, '06, 09:47

SliM_880 wrote:i think its cool dawg... like it alot :smoking:


thanx man :D
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Postby Bren08 » Sep 23rd, '06, 20:48

I also think its real good, KEEP IT UP!! :)
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