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Everlasting Pain

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Everlasting Pain

Postby B.A.D. » Sep 13th, '05, 22:50

When I was young I never though in Grown Up's life
with a nine under my pillow and depending on a rifle
I wake up, put on my chain and its always pain
whateva I do is the same to the game I'm playin
my cornrows hurt so bad, I fucked up the dreams I had
My girl is always mad, I lost half of my squad
Growin up in the streets, hustlin everyday
workin my ass off.....lifes pain just to get paid
i look in the mirror every morning to a villian
dressed black on black...Criminal feelin...
walkin the streets on my own..only my shadow
follows and guides me.......my feelings get shallow
gunshots errday, my cuzin's on jail for poaching
and my niggaz need me as a coach, I feel like a roach
bout ta get squashed, I can't be lighthearted
My life runs like an arpeggio, like if it was farted
the hood's always on war, my nigga stole m car
My life is keeped in a jar, all this became a mental scar
Drenched..........all soaked in blood and pain
look up to the sky yet pain keeps fallin like rain
keeps pourin and pourin, wont stop its hauntin
flourishin me tired..........i sit in the dar yawning
wit the shotgun in hand...........magnum in the other
to my left my moms yellin.....to the right is my brother
Ax Dogg walks the dog in the morning fog
when I less expect it, I get stomped like a bug
can't get the rats of the rug, The Pain revolution
I ain't gettin killed, I come from a soulja institution
feeling so down nothing i can do.......
lookin at my family......it turns me black and blue
there was nuthin in my mind...except for my pain
feelin it every single day....driving me insane.....
lying on the bed all soaked in blood.......its just begun
all thats left of me is a dead body...in hand is the shotgun!

-30-3- AKA - Ax Dogg-
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Postby Tomega » Sep 14th, '05, 13:47

PROPS good rhyming....
Good thinking with some lines!
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Postby eminemcaparica » Sep 14th, '05, 15:36

yau man, that shit is hot man, where did you come out?
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Postby AspirinE » Sep 14th, '05, 17:30

Nicee indeed
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Postby B.A.D. » Sep 14th, '05, 22:20

thnx for ya'll comments.... lol
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Postby B.A.D. » Sep 21st, '05, 04:40

thnx alyssa
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Postby B.A.D. » Sep 27th, '05, 15:07

......I'm uppin this shit.............
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Postby Coccoa » Sep 27th, '05, 22:40

Gangstah :P

Pretty good tho. Yo can you umm...record it? If you want i can send ya a beat for it.
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Postby B.A.D. » Oct 3rd, '05, 03:48

I'd love it lol....
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