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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 6th, '06, 02:45

Dear Lord,
if a pass away today make it painsless and quick ok
dont make it the last bullet in a oozy clip ,
coz all that pain and suffer i dont deserve it ,
im just asking when i go , make it pride and respuctufuly yo,
i dont wanne go by no junkie attacking me in the street ,
nor do i whant it to be by no crazy guy with heat ,
when i go i wanne do it on my terms , once ive accomplished my dreams,
so i can go and dream peacefully lord are you hearing me....?

(Chorus)
im asking these questions for the answers,
nothing less and nothing more,
answer them now before a boot you out the door,
lord, show me something , anything , im loosing my core(reapeat)

Dear Lord ,
make sure ma family are well looked after,
a love them so much , give me so much laughter,
a love my mum and ma sister no matter how much we yell,
i love my nephew so much id do lifetime in hell,
just so he has a happy life , i dont whant him to be like me ,
running around the streets at all times , i want him to run with glee ,
i want him to live peacefully no fighting or wars ya see ,
i love ma grandparents so much its hard to say ,
i wouldnt know what to do if a lost them today ,
i know they think am off the rails and am lettting them down ,
granda beileive me one day ill make you proud ,
a love you so much even though i dont speak it aloud,
and a know you love me to , when you leave i dunno what ill do ,
i should visit you more i really should ,i know i could if a tried ,
granda from all that you taught me at most you show me what a true man is,
i love you soo much granda remember this ,
and to ma gran i love her same ,you keep me a little more tame ,
i express this verse to show how i feel for ma famly , lord keep them real ,

(Chorus)

Dear Lord
prove to me people feel what a feel ,
this stress and anger tryna keep it real ,
show me the underdog can win ,
prove you can come from a bin , to a mansion , as rich as hansan ,
i seen so many of these story always currupt and illegal ,
i also heard peoples storys end , a drunken night in the regal ,
prove a boy from the street can become king ,
gold cloat , gold crown , and the platinum ring ,
prove to me that my words arent nothing,
if a keep goin ill become something ,
i dont thinnk id make it coz the big dogs,
can you prove this lord???

(Chorus)

Dear Lord
lord , lots of people pray to you,
asking for the lottery win , i know my mum do,
and if you gave her it would my life be all that ,
id create a million fake freinds that id give a slap,
my rapping would become bust ,
coz rich boys dont make it in the turf ,
life would be easy goin though, no ruf,
smooth sailing , million doller jets, the works ,
but does that work, would a really be happy ,
would i still write ma lyrics at night snappy,
lord tell me this , if a get a million dollors would it be happines,
lord can you answer this ?

(Chorus) No Repeat!

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hopefully gonni be a female signer on the chorus :D

Feedback please :D

the second verse in this is real emotional for me
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Postby Rae » Sep 6th, '06, 02:59

THATS GOOD!!! i like it! i didnt get 2 finish readin it all ... b/c i gotta get off here .. .


but tha part i read was great!

ill finish readin it 2morrow after school! :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 6th, '06, 03:03

Rae wrote:THATS GOOD!!! i like it! i didnt get 2 finish readin it all ... b/c i gotta get off here .. .


but tha part i read was great!

ill finish readin it 2morrow after school! :D


thx :D :D :D remember to post when ya read it all lol :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 17th, '06, 02:28

uppin this man i got no feedback :confusion:

part from rae :D :flower:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Sep 17th, '06, 02:40

great work man.
really emotional
what beat are you gonna record it on?
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 17th, '06, 02:58

ThomasAguanis wrote:great work man.
really emotional
what beat are you gonna record it on?


this is the song i said to evil deads abotu and asked for a slow sorta dear moma beat...and he ( coz hes the best profucer around :whistle: there i said it if he ever checks this lol ) agreed to give me one tommorrpw...i could use dear moma BUT the ebat is far to well known when you hear it you just think 2pac its to close a song for tupac to re-record for something close to me...if that makes sense......has anything ive posted tonight made sense :laughing:
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Postby Evil_Deedz666 » Sep 17th, '06, 03:23

Bar wrote:
this is the song i said to evil deads abotu and asked for a slow sorta dear moma beat...and he ( coz hes the best profucer around :whistle: there i said it if he ever checks this lol ) agreed to give me one tommorrpw...



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Bar wrote:prove you can come from a bin , to a mansion , as rich as hansan
Hanson AINT Rich No More :whistle: LMAO! Hahahaha!!!!


Overall good work dude :D ...Ill hook you up 2morrow :smoking:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 17th, '06, 10:44

Evil_Deedz666 wrote:
Bar wrote:
this is the song i said to evil deads abotu and asked for a slow sorta dear moma beat...and he ( coz hes the best profucer around :whistle: there i said it if he ever checks this lol ) agreed to give me one tommorrpw...



:toocool:



Bar wrote:prove you can come from a bin , to a mansion , as rich as hansan
Hanson AINT Rich No More :whistle: LMAO! Hahahaha!!!!


Overall good work dude :D ...Ill hook you up 2morrow :smoking:


lol i sayed hanson coz it rythmed and coz i seen them on mtv criba once and DAM they got a big ass house n thx :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 19th, '06, 00:32

audio of this song now availaible

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic. ... 434#293434

check it out :smoking:

Bar - Dear lord ft Max (produced by EvilsDeedz)
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Postby Mc Cubz » Sep 19th, '06, 15:28

YO BAR - BIG BIG lyrics nice to see some tracks with meaningfull content, we need a range of types of songs but u did the deep type justice with these lyrics! Ill download the audio 2nite.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Sep 19th, '06, 22:01

Mc Cubz wrote:YO BAR - BIG BIG lyrics nice to see some tracks with meaningfull content, we need a range of types of songs but u did the deep type justice with these lyrics! Ill download the audio 2nite.


thx man :D
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Postby McBryde » Sep 26th, '06, 19:22

bar ats good :)O:O:O:O :unsure:
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