This Life (lil Rhyme)

[.Giorgo.]

I got no inspiration. This is not good, it's just a bit of rhyme.
Please, give feedback and lots of tips.

I am different, i am my own. So leave me alone./
Get the fuck outta here. Just let me get blown./
Fuck the world, i have to do everything alone./
I have no homie, Just alone-to-tha-bone./
i got empty hoods, no hoes. and no respect./
I've did it by myself, everything is wrecked./
The world is big and hard and unfair, but fuck everything./
Fuck Bush, Fuck Tha Gangsters with their guns.Benzino-sing./
I'm not a homie, i'm not a G, fuck that shit./
I am my own, I'l spit my rhymes.. i'l spit./
Just give me a chance in this life, i choose for this life./
My own life, i aint got a gun.. i aint got respect.. i got a knife../

[PmT-Faith]

Perfect for flow, On topic, well done.....Props

But again there is flaws, But i like that kinda shit so i wont point em out atm....basically keep at that Pce

[Infliction]

100% honest, It was not too good, but just because of your english. One thing you gotta really work on first, Is your english, once you've learned proper grammar and all that, then you'll find that its a lot easier to spit. That's pretty much the only tip I can give for now, cuz that was the big issue i saw, so just keep at it, once you've got the grammar down, then you can work on making your rhymes more complex and deep, insightfull. Keep it up man

[PmT-Faith]

^^^^^^^^theres a flaw i noticed, a Huge deal for Upcomming rappers, You have got to nail Grammer bud