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Postby Marth » Oct 9th, '06, 15:46

It's about the world is dying or exploding in a few years, and this is a rap i made by it:p i hope ya like it, and pleazeee drop your oppinion


yo...
fucking world
yo

why guys why.. is this world dying
why guys why.. is that girl crying?
we guys we.. have destroyed our own world, where we live
we guys we.. have destroyed our own world. we can't forgive
in history churches were burning by troops of an other religion
now bombs are getting throwed by terrorists of an other religion
rainforests are getting capped down.. only for money
we want everything that walks and sits only for our honey
but when the count is in, and the costs are weighted;
Its never been worth the price we've paid.
we not enough .. so we get killed
it's just a matter of time.. and we all are grilled
it's getting hot on earth
we burn just by hot dirt
coral reefs getting destroyed for fish
and young boys are complaining about the dishes
guys we keep complaining.. but there must be a time for action
so guys how long will you be waiting? 100 years and a fraction?
wtf bitches come now and move up to an earht with health
cuz i think that we think to much about yourself
why can't we help the earth first
wy can't we think of another birth first
cuz what are we worth...
an example of you guys: "me first"
how selffish can you be
to always wanna be
the first who will see
who's today the vip
we guys are so selfish, I mean.. we just cut down wood for money
this world is getting lost.. just because of money-
just because of money
do you want some money too?
here you can get in your mouth
fucking money
it's destroying us
cuz how are the coarses of the toothbrushes?
fuck this world i gotta get out of here
or will you quit guys... don't hunt the bear
it's our own fault.. we burn, it's our own fault.. it was our turn
we builded factory's and plants,
just for comfort, i don't understand
what's happening.. are we crazy, no we wil die..
what's happening.. are we to lazy.. no we will cry

chorus:
stop this world, it are we who gotta go git wrong
eyo fuck this world it are we, human who admit wrong
spending money like crazy, eating ourselfs fat,
does noone think we are destroyng our own habitat?


eyo forests are already burning
and the woodcutters are already turning
vucan's are already exploding
there are wars going on and we go in
seas are already getting higher
and we keep asking, how why where
antartica is melting
we keep going on to sell thing's
people are hungry
but where i live, people are rich
but why can't we relax and watch to the sun 'nd sea
why does no one listen to my call.. fucking bitch
bugs, are destroying lands, and men
everything what's left, is sand but when
will this end
we are destroying ourselves, by comfort
comfort is our first priority last is sport
we gotta keep moving, but we're stuck, but we gotta keep doing thing's
don't you know what's happened in the past?
we had a war, it happened all to fast
we almost had a core war
and we are dumbing core detritus in sea
but what will happen, what will it be
huge water undulates will stream over different countries
the sea gets higher
so now fast as possible, buy blur
i hope that you understand what i say
cuz this world slowly fades
everyday there is more trouble on earth
core reactions, no birth


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Postby rhiannon » Oct 9th, '06, 21:26

i liekd it i got into it lol....to true...u got some points in there..well all of it really...i really liked it good work :flower:
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Postby Inzanity » Oct 9th, '06, 22:12

it was good, I liked the concept of it and I felt wat u were sayin' nice work :smoking:
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 9th, '06, 22:18

Did it take long to u to write it? Cuz u wasted ur time.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 9th, '06, 22:19

Coccoa wrote:Did it take long to u to write it? Cuz u wasted ur time.


yass!!!! :worship:
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 9th, '06, 22:27

Bar wrote:
Coccoa wrote:Did it take long to u to write it? Cuz u wasted ur time.


yass!!!! :worship:


He needed it.
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Postby Marth » Oct 10th, '06, 14:32

yeh right, are you outta dicks to suck?
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Postby Coccoa » Oct 10th, '06, 18:08

Nah we outta people to clown so we start picking on monkeys.
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