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there aint no you and me

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there aint no you and me

Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 01:07

everyday i waste my life away,
wonderin if your here to stay,
or is this just a one night stand,
are you gonna step up and be my man,
you know you have the upper hand,
on our relationship,
now aint that a bitch,
my mind is tellin me to leave,
i just need to have time to breath,
i need to make sure your what i want,
becuz i dont want it to come back and hont,
me for the rest of my life,
and "no- i dont want to be your wife.",
cant you see that we're to young,
truthfully im just looking for some fun,
it scares me when you talk about how its gonna be,
like me comin to live with you when im 18,
well babe that just aint me,
i know that i promised you that i wouldnt breadk up with you,
and that it would be your call,
but your actin like this is a free for all,
so i made up my mind,
for real this time,
so now that we're ova,
ima be screamin fuck icp ova and ova and ova!
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Postby stevethetruth » Oct 24th, '06, 02:23

yep i agree
fuck icp


lol

good job on this one i can see where it relates to what's going on
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 02:30

lol thanx!!!

yupp fuck icp!

yeah this was when i was mad ... :D
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Postby sweet_angel200629 » Oct 24th, '06, 03:49

wow, that was a really good poem
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Postby lenaespiritodefogo » Oct 24th, '06, 11:02

i'm impressed Rae, you really did a good job on writting that, keep the good work up ;)
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 14:34

thanx everyone! :D

(i really didnt think it was that good) lol
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