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Get Outta My Way

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Get Outta My Way

Postby .Giorgo. » Oct 24th, '06, 19:23

Get Outta My Way - Giorgo.

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Everyone that is in my way, get the fuck outta here.
Don't help me, i'm strong enough, i'll just take a beer.
Yeah that fix my probelms, my messed up life..
But leave me, I don't wanna talk.. I'm gonna take a knive.
Stab anyone who bother's me, sound hard. Don't understeand me wrong.
But like I said, leave me alone, I did it by myself, I'll just write a song.
That helps to express my feelings, take a joint, take a pill.
Yeah, I feel happy now, but at night you think about it,, God's Will.
It makes you happy but it fucks your life, but what I have to do.
I'm depressed, I hate everybody, Everything is going wrong.. Hippety-boo.
So leave me,, I'll solve it,, one day. But don't expect anything from me.
I lock myself up for a whole day, hating ma homies..Damn,, you degree ?


''This was 01 Verse, gonna write like 5 or 6 verses''
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Postby Rae » Oct 24th, '06, 19:25

its good! i like it ...

but when i was readin it ... it seemed a little choppy ...

like a letter or something ...

it didnt really seem alike a rap it seemed more like a letter that rhymed.

if that makes sense.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Oct 24th, '06, 22:22

Rae wrote:its good! i like it ...

but when i was readin it ... it seemed a little choppy ...

like a letter or something ...

it didnt really seem alike a rap it seemed more like a letter that rhymed.

if that makes sense.


what rae is tryna say is it dont flow good , witch is true it dont , but other than that its nice simple
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