True Lyricist

by **Kez** » Oct 24th, '06, 22:14

[Chorus]
I'm the true lyricsist that makes you wish you weren't as shit
As you really are, cause i out-rap you too when i really spit
Battling me is your newest fear, it is
You can try to deny it, but i know that you fruits just nearly wish
That when i battle you you could die from blood loss, as blue as the bluest river is
I piss people off with my truths i yearly dish
Because they think that i am just a useless queer and bitch
But when i battle it's meaty, so get your teeth chewing in it!

I put so much pressure on my opponents that i cause earthquakes
People get jealous so they deliver worse hate
I don't care about my age, his age or her age
I'd get more meat than i got from your battle if i ate a burnt stake
So think what you want, why does my age matter?
I should start as soon as i can, it helps create manners
That i'll use in later life, listen, my mates had a
Right laugh when they heard my recording, i aint stop, this is fate and
The people who criticise need to stop being critics
They stereotype because of my age, but when they hear me i want them to leave with it
Still replaying in my mind cause the lyrics are worth it, i reveal feeling
So just like you pay attention to what you see, look out for what you hear, which is
My special section that i excel in
At least i think, from the reception i got i feel like a repellant
But i'm still hellbent to succeed in this so you can pellet
My rap threads with insults, but i'll forever try to sell it! (Cause..)

[Chorus]
I'm the true lyricsist that makes you wish you weren't as shit
As you really are, cause i out-rap you too when i really spit
Battling me is your newest fear, it is
You can try to deny it, but i know that you fruits just nearly wish
That when i battle you you could die from blood loss, as blue as the bluest river is
I piss people off with my truths i yearly dish
Because they think that i am just a useless queer and bitch
But when i battle it's meaty, so get your teeth chewing in it!

I'm the master of emcees in a Fiat Punto shattering Bentleys
I'm standing on the top of the podium with bent knees
Cause im so high up that i crouch to see second and third
People listen to these records and words and find me as an exception of heard
Emcees who ain't even eighteen yet, i hate being said
That i shouldn't rap because of my age, but i make emceeing bet-
-ter than it already is, i don't mean to cause beef
But nobody, and i mean nobody will control me
Cause i rap for life, i could trap your fright
In a single rhyme, for my imagination can attack your mind
It's an assault on your senses, you've never felt it before
It's so hot, it can destroy any metal, it can start melting it raw
Sitting reading this for so long, your brain goes way too fast
You can't comprehend, recording this can make you gasp
It never takes me long to pick out which words rhyme
It must hurt your brain to try to rhyme like this, shit, it hurts mine!

[Chorus]
I'm the true lyricsist that makes you wish you weren't as shit
As you really are, cause i out-rap you too when i really spit
Battling me is your newest fear, it is
You can try to deny it, but i know that you fruits just nearly wish
That when i battle you you could die from blood loss, as blue as the bluest river is
I piss people off with my truths i yearly dish
Because they think that i am just a useless queer and bitch
But when i battle it's meaty, so get your teeth chewing in it!

----------

Two quick verses. No harsh crit not serious etc.

by **Kez** » Oct 24th, '06, 23:35

I'll re-record this, i did it quickly so it sucks. I'll post a new link when it's better.

by **Hadez** » Oct 25th, '06, 00:28

the beat is ill.

by **Kez** » Oct 25th, '06, 00:29

Hadez wrote:the beat is ill, did you make it?

Nah, i got it from this site: http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/02/d ... dID=156970

by **Hadez** » Oct 25th, '06, 00:30

Kez wrote:
Hadez wrote:the beat is ill, did you make it?

Nah, i got it from this site: http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/02/d ... dID=156970

soundclick's got madd beats. you got some nice lyrics tho.

by **Hadez** » Oct 25th, '06, 08:18

are you tryna sound like Yoda or sumthin?

by **Kez** » Oct 25th, '06, 13:20

Hadez wrote:are you tryna sound like Yoda or sumthin?

Yes, of course i am. :whistle:

by **Jay-19** » Oct 25th, '06, 17:43

Dude... or chick.. frankly I don't what you are considering your voice.

But I do know ONE thing: This sucked ass!
When I read the lyrics, it seemed dope, but then I got reaaaaaaally disapointed.

You got no flow, strange voice (for real), and I can't almost hear a word of what you're spittin'...

But other than that, good job. :whistle:

by **Hadez** » Oct 26th, '06, 02:05

KillahGoat wrote:Dude... or chick.. frankly I don't what you are considering your voice.

But I do know ONE thing: This sucked ass!
When I read the lyrics, it seemed dope, but then I got reaaaaaaally disapointed.

You got no flow, strange voice (for real), and I can't almost hear a word of what you're spittin'...

But other than that, good job.

i agree, your flow was umm... different. and i hope that's not your real voice.

True Lyricist

True Lyricist

Who is online