my verse for maybe's kill me song

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 24th, '06, 19:38

I walked up in the club all the groupies showing love
Cause they know my style I rise so far above
My boys told me someone wanted to call me out
I was laughing thinking this dude ain

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 19:49

steve thats awesome!

when did u write that?

well n e ways i love it!

keep up tha good work!

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 24th, '06, 19:50

Rae wrote:steve thats awesome!

when did u write that?

well n e ways i love it!

keep up tha good work!

i wrote it like a week ago i think lol

thanks for the feed ash

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 19:52

steverocks88 wrote:
Rae wrote:steve thats awesome!

when did u write that?

well n e ways i love it!

keep up tha good work!
i wrote it like a week ago i think lol

thanks for the feed ash

lol thats cool

np ... i'll always give feedback 2 tha 2nd best rapper ever!

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 24th, '06, 20:02

yo clarky all the lines rhymes except for the last one

but yeah i hear ya i don't really care i wrote this in like 3 minutes thinking i wasn't gonna make it to the track but w/e we'll see what happens

and yeah thanks for the feed but i personally could care less if i rhyme or not cause i make music for myself and for me only

:happy:

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 20:02

Clarky wrote: Btw Rae, would you ever give bad feedback to steve? lol..........

yeah ...

lol

i did earlier so there *sticks tounge out* :tounge2:

lmao

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 24th, '06, 20:18

Clarky wrote:
steverocks88 wrote:yo clarky all the lines rhymes except for the last one

but yeah i hear ya i don't really care i wrote this in like 3 minutes thinking i wasn't gonna make it to the track but w/e we'll see what happens

and yeah thanks for the feed but i personally could care less if i rhyme or not cause i make music for myself and for me only

Soz missed that post.

i make music for myself and for me only

Oh okay.

lol funny both at it agian like last time lmao

hey i got a link of 12 tracks off my album you know i would really like some serious feed on what to improve on in case i made another album
let me know if you want the link man

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 24th, '06, 20:25

pm'ed ya man

by **2 DeeP** » Oct 24th, '06, 20:54

nice

but y let the guy kill yoo :whistle:

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 21:05

Clarky wrote:
Rae wrote:
Clarky wrote: Btw Rae, would you ever give bad feedback to steve? lol..........

yeah ... lol

i did earlier so there *sticks tounge out* lmao

When?

im sorry it took me so long 2 respond ... but my power cut off for like 30 min. :angry:

but im glad b/c it pissed/pisses me off that u care so much about what i tell steve!

this post is alot nicer than my otha one was gonna be.

but i gave him neg. feed on aim earlier 2day about his "all eternity" song (about the chorus) ... :smoking:

so ........ ugh ........ im tryin 2 keep it PG ...

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 21:54

my bad i submited it twice ...

by **Rae** » Oct 24th, '06, 21:55

Clarky wrote:Lmao.

Go for it. Swear

nahh im good ... im not really that mad anymore ...

i just dont give a fuck about it ... :smoking:

cocaine is a hell of a drug :smoking:

(btw i woulda been cussin usually but there was a kid on my lap when i was typin it)

by **2 DeeP** » Oct 25th, '06, 13:17

Sarah wrote:
2 DeeP wrote:nice but y let the guy kill yoo

Cos that's what he was meant to write. The song's called Kill Me and they had to write about going to a club or sumin, and dying in the end sumin like that.

What Clarky said was right lol. But you're alot newer to writing than Maybe. It takes practice and practice gets you better. For somoene on your writing level it was good . So overall...well done

i new that :whistle:

by **stevethetruth** » Oct 26th, '06, 03:57

lol yeah thanks for the feedback i'm trying my best to improve lol

my verse for maybe's kill me song

my verse for maybe's kill me song

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