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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 1st, '06, 10:32

thanx for the feed ya'll imma use this as a platform to go forward now everything is gonni eb this good and better :smoking:
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Postby HAYZI » Nov 1st, '06, 14:01

yeh that was good man youve got potential.


glad i inspired you to up your game :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 3rd, '06, 00:58

bumping :smoking:
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