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Wake The Fuck Up

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Wake The Fuck Up

Postby Kez » Nov 1st, '06, 23:03

Get outta bed, idiot, realise it and wake the fuck up
Get your dusty record player out and play it an' suck up!
Motherfuckers ain't gonna stop the music playin', buttfucks
Can be as jealous as they want, they're just gay and should shut up!
You're so jealous you can't watch me
When i get invited to crews because i rap so hotly
But calm down, cause violence is wrong, he'd
Just pick up a guitar, dye your hair and sing a sad song, see
That's what the market's lookin for at the moment
My mind's sometimes stiffer than you in the mornin' wit' boner!
Maybe i need to grow up, cause i'm actin so childish
I'm too young and naive to be crackin such wild shit!
But i just throw it in front of you, you start attacking and while it
Would please you to just insult me, you must accept i can rhyme bitch
How far can i take this shit before i get called a w.igga?
You just pissed cause i get bigger, i ain't no love song singer
You'll believe anything! That girl is cool! (HE FRIGGED HER!)
I pop you, like you pop a bulbous blister!

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Feed please.
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Re: Wake The Fuck Up

Postby Marth » Nov 2nd, '06, 19:45

men it's good, good punches, good rhyme
just good shit yo
The world has gone crazy like eminem on kim
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Nov 2nd, '06, 19:54

i have to agree...good shit!!!nice multies :smoking:
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Postby C-Game » Nov 2nd, '06, 20:05

nice multis and stuff
flow is maintained tooo
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Nov 2nd, '06, 21:27

good shit :smoking: lol keep it up :worship:
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Postby DC4952 » Nov 3rd, '06, 01:23

nice, i liked the multies :8)
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Postby ShadyGD26 » Nov 3rd, '06, 08:14

tht was ill shyt propz
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