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You didn't even feed my last one

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 14th, '06, 20:10

I'm Devilish the way I Level Kids but I'm far from Satan
Black Rags and Fat bags I'm a Rebel Bitch I need no Rating

You Can Read a New Man Leads so Move Aside I Rip the New Man
your Small Mind Falls Behind unless you Prove Otherwise If You Can

my Drops Crush your Not Tough you only act like you Rock Us
Stop I've seen Enough you post retarded like you Got Rushed

I'm a street Advocate I'm Hazordous this can of whoop ass I Opened It
you come at me like you Had A Dis you call police like you [C- OPS]
[c-ops see opiates]
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Postby Rae » Nov 14th, '06, 20:58

thats good! (i havent ever seen any of ur stuff b4 ... but thats prob. b/c im grounded and can never get online anymore lol)

but yeah i like it! :D

it rhymed and flowed great!

i cant wait 2 see some more of ur stuff!

(and i'll make sure i give u some feedback on ur stuff b/c i know its dissapointing when u dont get any feedback)

keep it up :D
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