you and me

by **Golden** » Nov 23rd, '06, 23:01

U and me, it used to be just us against all odds we made it, we survived all the bullshit thrown our way, nobody can say we didn't put up a fight; fuckin' good one to right? Remember the way u looked at me, the face, Oh, the unbelivable, unexplainable pretty face, those trusting blue eyes, that hot mouth, with all those promising words, turned out to be lies. That perfect body, tasted deelicious
Everything's bloody. Im violent, Im hurting your cryin` our little world's fallin`, we're trying but inside I'm dyin`, now it's over, we're denying the fact that nothing's gonna go, it over, no more. Never felt like this before, being left by the one u adore. With loose word and she's telling you she loves u still, makes me just wanna see her blood spill, fuckin kill that bitch, or maybe just give
her a desperate kiss, on that sweet tastin` mouth.
It used to be us against the fools, doin' crazy shit, things we were gonna regret, but I'll bet u that we will never forget that time, back then, when it was just us, I'm sayin' it again...

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by **Inzanity** » Nov 24th, '06, 12:14

that was pretty good I know wat it's like to love some1 and then they leave u and yet they say they still love u but yet they won't be with u. God I hate that but anyway nice job on this I like it I can really relate to this