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Loyal

Postby Browngangsta210 » Nov 28th, '06, 11:40

Many people don't keep their word or their promise
And thats when you know thier not always honest
You have to know who are your real friends
and wich one will just drive off in their mercedes Bens
I'm true about what i rap about
And everything else i shout
You don't need to be loyal
You can just tear apart like aluminum foil
fall down to the soil and your gushing out blood
I'll be mobbing it and smoking bud
I will never cheat on my gurl wit a hoe
And this i know because thats my word
I don't know if anyone else heard
With rhymes like mines will be to heavy
I guess that means i'm always ready
To kill someone nice and steady
You told me your rhymes will be blowin up bannanas
But you lied to me you just went getting some ass
Mutha f***er your the lie, and i want you to die
So goodbye!

-I WUS THINKING BOUT MY HOMIE DAT LIED TO ME ALL DA TIME AND ALL THIS JUST CAME OUT, I WUSN'T EVEN THINKING I JUST LOOKED UP AND NEXT THING YOU KNOW I HAD THIS ONE VERSE DONE-
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Postby Coccoa » Nov 28th, '06, 12:20

Thats not a freestyle.
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