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Don't let it go there

Postby Rain Matrix » Nov 29th, '06, 08:09

tha Design Works my Mind Beserk my flows da Earth ya got Dirt Rymes
is this ya First Time I Reimburse Lines fuck ya pride ya don't Hurt Mine

Unclinch ya Fists ya in a hurry ta see ya Punches Miss I won't move One Inch
ya a Cinch Son Singed From an Orange Illusion nah real flames Click This Is

tha Red Pill is a Head Thrill your Fed Nil cuz ya got Fill Instead of Skill
I have a Blue Pill ya Through Till I Who Kill but son thats You Still

ya no Great Foe ya what the Fake Chose something like a Mistake Dose
I Wait ya Doze ya passed out but I Take Both and still Dictate you Pose

remember Thunder Lightning Rain ya false as is what ya Got to Say
ya like One Word Fighting ya in da Drain soon ta be Washed Away

Fumble Todays Win as ya Mumble Phrases me Stumble not if I was Payed Ta
we Rumble it's Straight Fists I'll Pummel his Face In ya Crumble like ya Weightless ya Tumble like ya took a Laced Hit and these are Humble Expectations
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Postby Ghst84 » Nov 29th, '06, 13:24

it looks pretty tight. great work, man! keep it up! :)
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Postby C-Game » Nov 29th, '06, 16:44

damn man :worship:
yo u ever consider audio
if u can flow those words then simpy nice
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